The Final Game

by x_los [Reviews - 10]

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  • Adult
  • Explicit Sex, Non-Con
  • Angst, Romance, Slash

1. Chapter 1 [Reviews - 3] (5777 words)
Beta: deborah_judge, which went much like:
Me: How can I kill my purple prose?
Her: mean, how Delgado!Master /talks/?
Me: ...ah.
Her: Yep.

2. Chapter 2 [Reviews - 0] (5838 words)
Beta: deborah_judge, who made me change a major plot element and rewrite two and a half scenes, and was totally right.
A/N: Ridiculous 'What kind of tree' game courtesy of Mark of the Rani, and high school students with crushes everywhere.

3. Chapter 3 [Reviews - 7] (7551 words)
Beta: deborah_judge, who does not like rambly introspection as much as I do. Which is a REALLY good thing, because otherwise there'd be like, a whole two pages of dithering in here, and one less page of sex.