I get the whole Gwen=goodness thing but I don't particularly like it in the series--I don't think Jack needs to be protected--he just needs a Doctor =)...love the story, again read it on lj somewhere and...your semi-/dark pieces both inspire and depress me...wonderful, really.
Thanks for the Rose/Gwen comparison... I thought that after seeing the Torchwood premiere, but forgot about it. You amplify that element, thanks!