What a brilliant story!
I get the whole Gwen=goodness thing but I don't particularly like it in the series--I don't think Jack needs to be protected--he just needs a Doctor =)...love the story, again read it on lj somewhere and...your semi-/dark pieces both inspire and depress me...wonderful, really.
Thanks for the Rose/Gwen comparison... I thought that after seeing the Torchwood premiere, but forgot about it. You amplify that element, thanks!
Liked this, especially the last sentence. Thank you.
Dark indeed but very nice all the same. Thanks