:) ooo I have read both stories back to back, and I have to say that Lora is my favorite OC. It is a great idea to have a grunt Gallifreyan in the company of a renegade time lord. Just right personality with 4th Doctor also. I enjoyed your characterizations of the other species as well, very detailed. Very much favorited!
Author's Response: Hi there. Thanks for the kind review. I like Lora a lot and after she pretty much saved their butts in the first story, I had to let the Doctor rescue her in the second one.
Trying now to work out what happens in the third tale, but don\'t hold your breath on that one--I write at the pace of continental drift.
:) ooo I have read both stories back to back, and I have to say that Lora is my favorite OC. It is a great idea to have a grunt Gallifreyan in the company of a renegade time lord. Just right personality with 4th Doctor also. I enjoyed your characterizations of the other species as well, very detailed. Very much favorited!
Come along, Sancho! Vaminos!
Haha, oh, this is brilliant. *reads on*
Oh, this was so good! You got everyone's characters JUST RIGHT! I really loved reading this! Hope this isn't the end...?
So good! Please go on!
Author's Response: As you wish...
Very inventive. I appreciate all the effort you're going to in building an alien world, culture, and multiple races. I'm having a little trouble keeping it all clear, but I am enjoying it.
Author's Response: Hi Lilac, thanks for checking in. I appreciate the feedback and have had some struggles trying to make this story a bit more clear. I\'ll take specific questions/comments if you email or PM me--it might help the tale. I\'m never too proud to edit. :-)