What a brilliant story!
Author's Response: Awww! Thanks, Lily!!!
I love the fact that you've captured Jack's thoughts on the Doctor so perfectly, both hating and loving the Time Lord. This is beautiful work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I just thought there was a bit more to Jack than what we saw. Thanks for the review!
I like this - particularly "He hates the Doctor a little. Loves him, too, but thatís just because heís the Doctor. Hates him for making a claim on Rose when she doesnít get to make a claim in return. " We forget sometimes that people capable of inspiring great love can also inspire the opposite in the very ones who love them. I like the fact that you catch that here. I look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you. Thank you so, so much. That\'s exactly what I was aiming for. Brilliant review!