2016.01.09 - 06:35PM
1: Prologue -- Departures

Have to agree with you on all counts. Now that we're on Capaldi's version, it makes even less sense than before that Nine regenerated so easily. The thought crossed my mind that Rose might have matched her longevity to his while she had the chance to do so.

2015.08.30 - 07:46PM
12: Chapter 11 -- Third Time's the Charm?

It saddens me this is never going to be finished. :( Unless it's posted elsewhere! I truly adore the way you've woven everything together.

2013.04.23 - 08:23PM
1: Prologue -- Departures

Monster Truck Rally - Those are a lot more destructive. He's lucky she used a tow truck, really. Hooking the console to Bigfoot would have ripped it out of the floor and down the street.

2011.06.01 - 01:59AM
12: Chapter 11 -- Third Time's the Charm?

Good chapter. I hate to see the Doctor distancing himself after that fantastic reunion. Despite how long it has been since you updated, I hope you're still working on this story. I can't wait to read more. =)

2011.06.01 - 01:34AM
11: Chapter 10 -- The Long Way

Great chapter! I LOVED the Doctor's reaction to seeing Rose again. I also loved the changes from the original episode. It always killed me that Ten was able to leave Rose so easily, even if it was what he had to do. Nine doesn't seem like the type to do that. Although, I didn't think Ten could before that episode either. Sigh.

2011.06.01 - 01:17AM
10: Chapter 9 -- Tea and Some Kind of -Pathy

Great chapter. I loved the telepathic intimacy they shared and that Rose was respectful enough not to invade his mind. I would've loved to see him welcome her though. =)
I also loved that warmth during their kiss and that the Doctor got to see that.

2011.06.01 - 12:53AM
9: Chapter 8 -- Miner Complications

Great chapter! I loved the Doctor's comment about her boyfriends across time and space, and their moment before Mickey interrupted. I'm also glad Rose is beginning to recover some of her memories as Bad Wolf.

2011.06.01 - 12:30AM
8: Chapter 7 -- Zanak Ahoy!

I have a feeling that trying to save the miners will prove to be a bad idea. 0.o

2011.06.01 - 12:03AM
7: Chapter 6 -- Exiled

Can't wait to see what will happen next.

Author's Response: I feel terrible, because you\'re about to discover that I abandoned this fic several years ago (in favor of writing my own original world novel). On the other hand, your wonderful enthusiasm has reminded me that I had a story to tell here that I really liked. I\'m tempted to brush this off and come back to it. Thank you :)

2011.06.01 - 12:00AM
6: Chapter 5 -- Return to Ribos

Good chapter. Loved that little moment between Nine and Rose.

2011.05.31 - 11:45PM
5: Chapter 4 -- Aftermath of a Kiss

Good chapter. I'm glad Rose wouldn't just let Jack be left behind. =)

2011.05.31 - 11:31PM
4: Chapter 3 -- The Gift of Time

Once again, aww. It's nice to see the Doctor getting something for a change. It's interesting to think that he offers all of time and space without asking for anything beyond their company. A bit flattering and undeniably sad.

2011.05.31 - 11:21PM
3: Chapter 2 -- Intro to Physics

Lmao! The ending of the willy bit was hilarious.

2011.05.31 - 11:13PM
2: Chapter 1 -- The Twelfth Day

Aww. Great chapter.

2011.05.31 - 11:03PM
1: Prologue -- Departures

Great chapter. I can't wait to see how things will play out with Nine and Rose. =)