Very very nice, yes, write more! :)
Nice! Is it a Haiku...? Who cares, it's poetry and it's beautiful.
I've done experimenatal poetry myself. Yours is awesome! More, more! ^_^
Author's Response: Okay, thanks, I\'ll do my best! I\'ll read yours, all right? *smiles*
How can you fit so many emotions into so few words? Wow. Brill!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you. I\'m extremely flattered!And to answer: I really don\'t know. *shrugs* Thanks again!