Is the first bit meant to be done as a voice over? Quick crit: I'm not sure running would be smart, the troops going over the top had to walk slowly or they'd be hit by their own side's creeping barrage. The bit about Santa at the end made me giggle.
Thanks for another excellent story! And some fine moral questioning.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, and thank you for the crit, always welcome them and take them on board =) Thanks for the review as always =)