hi, i think youre stories are brill, are you going to finish this one.xx
Good on Hayley. She's confirming my opinion of her as one of the best OCs I've seen.
I'm liking the idea, how torchwood and everything tie in. Maybe the Rose thing is like a hint towars Rose? i Don't knw. your writing style often seems a little unprofessional but then, you arent a proessional and ive just started mny first one and its terrible!
the girl being all magical slihgtly reminds me of 'fear her'.. anyways good luck!
So far, I like this. Original companions are tough to write, and so far I like Hayley. Looking forward to seeing more.
That's an intriguing start. It's quite logical that the Doctor's companions would end up goldmines of information for people like Torchwood.
OooOoOh! Neato! Torchwood trickery and whatnot. You've started a really neat piece here. We will wonder if we can trust the Doctor's new companion if she does join him... she seems pretty neat!
A very compelling and interesting idea for a story! I like that he was somehow drawn there via the library and acted so rude. True to form :)
“Aliens that look human? I thought that was just in cheap films with no make up budget.”
Made me laugh-- isn't it so? Great start. I look forward to the next chapter!