So hot, and this now my official canon, it really happened, I am sticking to it, you can't tell me otherwise, na na na na, I'm not listening!
So damn hot and sexy and DEFINITELY what happened before they left. This line "Gods, look at you. If I had more time, I'd stretch every tight little hole you've got so wide...."
OH MY GOD!!! One of the hottest lines I've ever read. I can JUST hear that in JB's voice and I'm like ... GUH!!!
What a brilliant story!
Excellent job, very hot, and a *great* characterization of Jack.
I see you found the secret censored not-for-broadcast version of the episode. Thanks for sharing! ;) No, seriously, well written and very hot.
Very hot! That line about the secret hand shake nearly killed me-- very funny too. That was an EXCELLENT missing scene.
LOL this was fun and can't wait to see if you write a follow up and wonder if Rose and the Doctor get to Dance??
Gorgeous and so hot!