2006.07.22 - 08:39PM
12: Chapter 12

"Well, go on then, don't keep me in suspense. Tell me."


Augh! You're enjoying this, aren't you? Dammit, I'm allergic to suspense.

2006.07.21 - 11:50AM
11: Chapter 11

Hope the Doctor does more than just talk to the Master he should boot him out once and for all. Another exciting chapter - thanks.

2006.07.20 - 03:14PM
10: Chapter 10

'As I was crossing London Bridge I met my sister Jenny. I broke her neck and drank her dry and left her standing empty.' Eek. Bad Master.

2006.07.20 - 11:57AM
10: Chapter 10

Ooh I never did like the Master shudder. Hope the Doctor is able to get out of this fix Great Chapter.

2006.07.19 - 01:46PM
9: Chapter 9

It seems this Doctor is good at psychologically manipulating his companions into leading the way- and then giving her grief for almost getting mauled...made me laugh.

Oh my! you left them in a bit of a pickle!

2006.07.19 - 10:25AM
9: Chapter 9

This series continues to amaze. Great plot, and also wonderful characterization and emotion too.

2006.07.18 - 05:06PM
8: Chapter 8

It's me again. I just can't resist commenting, there is so much coolness going on in this chapter. Note to self: don't try to match pain with the Doctor. Also: 'Is he a nice man?' 'Er, no.' *giggle*

2006.07.17 - 01:26PM
7: Chapter 7

Nice moment there at the end. I like your Doctor. Man of action-- nice vibe.

2006.07.17 - 01:21PM
6: Chapter 6

Egad! how awful! all that slurping and blood on lace-- lovely writing, mind, but awful nasty sucky scene!
More please!

2006.07.17 - 01:00PM
5: Chapter 5

How exciting, I always love a appearance from the Master! Well done!

2006.07.16 - 10:51AM
1: Chapter 1

Just finished chapter six. Your narrative style is very engaging, and the descriptions are fantastic. The vampire creature is painted vividly in my head, *shudders*.

Great story so far

2006.07.16 - 09:34AM
6: Chapter 6

*ahem* wanted to give my last review a little clarity: I think you're a wonderful writer. And this is a particularly good chapter--the mise en scene is vivid.

2006.07.14 - 12:21PM
4: Chapter 4

Yeah! Another stuck up aristocratic family with a secret! The “old country” must just be brimming with them. I love the way the Doctor uses his "charm!" Ha!

2006.07.14 - 11:12AM
1: Chapter 1

How wonderfully fun. Good characterisation of the young serving girl... I bet there are plans for her? I look forward to meeting your Doctor.

2006.07.13 - 03:06PM
3: Chapter 3

I am starting to get the hang of this Doctor at last. You know, I've read all these stories and I still haven't watched or read 'Shalka'. :) So it must be you I like.