"Well, go on then, don't keep me in suspense. Tell me."
Augh! You're enjoying this, aren't you? Dammit, I'm allergic to suspense.
Hope the Doctor does more than just talk to the Master he should boot him out once and for all. Another exciting chapter - thanks.
'As I was crossing London Bridge I met my sister Jenny. I broke her neck and drank her dry and left her standing empty.' Eek. Bad Master.
Ooh I never did like the Master shudder. Hope the Doctor is able to get out of this fix Great Chapter.
It seems this Doctor is good at psychologically manipulating his companions into leading the way- and then giving her grief for almost getting mauled...made me laugh.
Oh my! you left them in a bit of a pickle!
This series continues to amaze. Great plot, and also wonderful characterization and emotion too.
It's me again. I just can't resist commenting, there is so much coolness going on in this chapter. Note to self: don't try to match pain with the Doctor. Also: 'Is he a nice man?' 'Er, no.' *giggle*
Nice moment there at the end. I like your Doctor. Man of action-- nice vibe.
Egad! how awful! all that slurping and blood on lace-- lovely writing, mind, but awful nasty sucky scene!
How exciting, I always love a appearance from the Master! Well done!
Just finished chapter six. Your narrative style is very engaging, and the descriptions are fantastic. The vampire creature is painted vividly in my head, *shudders*.
Great story so far
*ahem* wanted to give my last review a little clarity: I think you're a wonderful writer. And this is a particularly good chapter--the mise en scene is vivid.
Yeah! Another stuck up aristocratic family with a secret! The “old country” must just be brimming with them. I love the way the Doctor uses his "charm!" Ha!
How wonderfully fun. Good characterisation of the young serving girl... I bet there are plans for her? I look forward to meeting your Doctor.
I am starting to get the hang of this Doctor at last. You know, I've read all these stories and I still haven't watched or read 'Shalka'. :) So it must be you I like.