Nice story- I'm very curious about this girl... though I thought they all were older from the first chapter. The aliens were quite a surprise. Nice of them to give out tea cakes though. Will look for your next story.
Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked the aliens. So many stories have the scary looking aliens be the villians so I wanted to do a bit of a change.
Interesting! I do hope you have more on the way?! It was just getting interesting. I am curious about Susan... is this a Susan we might know? With a title such as you have it makes one think! Cheers!
Author's Response: I could anwser that for you, but that would be telling. *G*
Author's Response: The first part of Return to Tara is posted.