2006.06.29 - 07:55PM
1: Never

Short can be good. It was a cute scene. But punctuation and proper use of capital letters (especially with names such as Rose and the Doctor) would have helped and made it easier to read.

Author's Response: look i may be a time lady and i may be 342 but you can\'t expect me to spell. oh my goodness i really can\'t spell...*bursts into tears*

2006.06.29 - 11:00AM
1: Never

It's good, but next time it would be good if they were longer (=

Author's Response: i know i just get so bored writing long stories!!!!!

Author's Response: i know i just get so bored writing long stories!!!!!

2006.06.29 - 10:07AM
1: Never

People, review it!!! more please!!

Author's Response: thanks!!!!!!!!!