Brilliant! You have me in tears and I usually hate author-created companions. Well done, indeed! I echo the others in saying your character voices are spot on and I cannot wait (though now as the inevitable decline begins it this anticipation is not without some dread) to read the rest. Again, thanks so much for posting these here.
What a place to end! You are very cruel. Thank you anyway, for another excellent story.
Just sat and read through the story so far. Loved it very much, yes.
Author's Response: Thanks Carmen, that means a lot coming from you.
Oh, of course Jasmine will go after the Master! This is a great story so far, can't wait to see what happens next.
I love the last bit. There's nothing scarier than the Master saying, 'Trust me.'
Oh, yay for more of this story! You are the master of the cliffhanger :) Speaking of Master, I am totally loving him. I love how Jasmine has to suppress the flare of admiration for his creeptastically clockwork conniving and planning.
So cool! It's a very Third Doctor era instalment and I loved it.
Great installment! I am a newbie and haven't really had much exposure to the Master (ie, like, none), but from how you've written the character, I really like him as a bad guy.
Jasmine needs her long spoon to sup with the Master. Very nice Master characterization, btw.
aaa! Great cliffhanger! Can't wait to find out what happens next. :)
Eek, what a beginning. That's never a good way to wake up. But it's a cool way to start a story.
Whoa. Way to knock a reader for a loop. And yes, more utter amazement from me. This series is so going into my favorites.
Author's Response: Thanks, Eve. Only just realised you\'ve reviewed my earlier stories as well. Much appreciated.