2006.06.28 - 04:24AM
1: Chapter 1

That was sweet! It's good to see you writing again.

Author's Response: Thanks, it\'s good to be back!

2006.06.25 - 04:36PM
4: Chapter 4

Eureaka! lol. but the epilogue was one of the most beautiful things i have ever read...especially the referring to Rose as his butterfly...awww. Loved it! :) Well done!

Author's Response: Why thank you! Thats a really nice thing to say *blushes*

2006.06.25 - 04:28PM
3: Chapter 3

Argh! I want to know what happens...great chapter by the way...loved Rose's reaction 'why him and not me', aww anyhoo I am off to read the next chapter. :)

2006.06.25 - 04:23PM
2: Chapter 2

LOVED THIS CHApTER! :) It had everything in it, the Doctor flirting, him actually showing some hidden emotion, a butterfly (very sad that it is dying, hope they save it), wonderfully described area and now it has a mystery cliffhanger right at the end of it! YAY! Well done!

2006.06.25 - 04:17PM
1: Chapter 1

Hooray! Haven't read a story from you for a while and I am loving it so far! Especially the last line *melts* awwww. :)

2006.06.24 - 08:36PM
4: Chapter 4

Lovely story, nice bit of tension, fun resolution.

The Epilogue is particularly poignant, though, and contains brilliant details from first to last. The Doctor's definition of 'the most peaceful place.' And the butterfly alegory - beautiful.

Well done!

2006.06.24 - 01:37PM
1: Chapter 1

Awww, I love it. Really nice change to all the angsty stuff we're getting (sob!) andI love the last bit. :)

2006.06.24 - 12:22PM
4: Chapter 4


The Doctor's final realisation is some sort of allegory for his time with Rose no? or his feelings for the human race... so much potential?
Nice story- though there would be no way the planet could be covered in an hourů but letting facts like that go it is lovely :)


Author's Response: Hee, I know! It was 4 in the morning of the submission day, tho, and I had the epilogue in my head, so I thought hey, wrap it up!

2006.06.24 - 11:09AM
1: Chapter 1

That TARDIS never quite gets them where they expectů it always is interesting though. I like the scenery, nice sky.

2006.06.24 - 10:22AM
1: Chapter 1

Please write a sequel.
I would love to see the Brigs reation to the new doctor and to Rose.