I liked it. My only nit pick would be that it's Sarah Jane, not just Sarah. Otherwise, very well written, especially Sarah Jane's insecurities about growing older and still being attractive.
I liked it. My only nit pick would be that it's Sarah Jane, not just Sarah. Otherwise, very well written, especially Sarah Jane's insecurities about growing older and still being attractive.
Dark and witty. Sarah Jane should guest star in Torchwood. I hope they give Jack more edge. He can bring it.
I really enjoyed that - it was beautifully written and flowed really well. Never thought of Jack and Sarah together, but now I've read it ... Hmm ...
Oooh, very nice. SJS/Jack *nods* I can definitely see that happening. Love it!
Oh, wow! That was a good one! Favorite line: "...the man was a bad influence of the highest calibre." And what a terrific change of pace and mood halfway through... brilliant.
That was so good. Very naughty, and I could hear both of their voices as plain as day.
Love this. So in character for both of them. Brilliant.
I really, really liked this. :) I had Jack meet Sarah-Jane in a fic of mine and I was practically holding him back then ;) - it makes perfect sense to me that he'd be very, very interested. Even better, though, that there's a plot to this. Loved their conversation about the Doctor, all without naming him. And the implied agreement that she'd look him up again. All in all, loved this - your characterisation, the detail, the resolution, everything.
Oh I like that * a lot* - Jack/SJS makes an intriguing combination and you managed it beautifully - in-character, and *honest*. Saves to treasure.