Haha, that's great. I'm honestly beginning to wonder why people don't review your stuff more often. It's well-written fanfiction.
HAha, you had Eleven wearing pinstripes before you knew Ten did? That's hilarious!
So was this chapter. Much fun. Looking forwards to reading this one through.
You watch Yes Minister. Don't deny it. How could you? Bernard was a helpful, condsiderate, upright character.....mostly. I won't deny that it's funny, though. More of this madness (Bernard as head of Torchwood)? Please?
We could be so lucky to have Torchwood (the show) turn out as exciting. Of course you have just started this story right? much more to come, yeah? Come on say 'yes'!
Author's Response: Not in this story. But my upcoming fic \'Shadows of Gallifrey\' will feature Torchwood - and it will be exciting
Ah! Another female Doctor. Neat!
Nice missing scene-- how did Harriet recover her 'health'... nicely done- where to next?
Author's Response: This female Doctor\'s been around for a while. This is about the 4th or 5th fic in the series featuring her.