Reviews For Unraveled

2022.08.16 - 06:10AM
1: Part I

Wow. I've got to say that was some first chapter. I was very intrigued when the Doctor first went to the hotel. I had no idea it was going to be so intense. Your description of all of the horrible things that Kaia had to endure was very detailed and really added to the story. For a while there I thought that Adam was as bad as the Master. You've put so much feeling and emotion into this story. Kaia is great and I love how she's travelling with the Doctor and that he took away all of those terrible memories. In some ways it could've ended with this chapter but I'm hooked and I would love to read more.