The Doctor is a complete mess without Rose and he's going to end up regenerating himself if he isn't careful. Rose doesn't seem to be doing any better judging by her messages. Jackie's call has me worried for Rose. If Jimmy Stone got his paws on Rose, who knows what he'd do to her? The key being ripped from her neck, along with the earring does not bode well.
This was one intense chapter. I loved it! ^_^
Author's Response: Oh I’m so chuffed you enjoyed it. In the face of danger to Rose the Doctor and Jackie have united! I like Jackie. She’s a blast. Thanks so much.
It's a relief they managed to escape the giant spiders (shudder). But Rose's continued flaunting of the "don't wander off" rule has finally driven the Doctor over the edge. I feel bad for Rose and wonder if the Doctor's gone too far. I suppose he had to do something. I have a feeling the consequences of this will affect them both in a negative way.
I'm completely hooked on this story and glad that I have more chapters to read! ^_^
Author's Response: Yeahhh! You’re hooked! Fair warning, rocky path ahead for our heroes but it’s a wild ride. The story is finished so I will be posting every four to five days. It’s lovely to hear from you!
The Doctor should know by now that wandering off is Rose's specialty. This time she's really in danger. Giant spiders! Eek! The only thing that would make it worse if there were clowns in the hole with her. Double eek!
Exciting start to what looks like is going to be an intense, and angst-filled, story if this first chapter is any indication. Great job! (I kept this short! Heh!) ^_^
Author's Response: Short and sweet I say! Loved it, but even more ,I’m thrilled you’re reading this one! I hope you enjoy it. Look after yourself. Cheers
I'm glad the Doctor was able to heal Rose's internal problems, and that he's going to ease her mental anguish as well. Gotta say though, letting Jackie aid and abet him in taking care of Jimmy Stone? Could be trouble!
Author's Response: Your intuition is right. There’s no chance the Doctor would allow Jackie to kill. The Doctor alone will deal with Jimmy and his gang starting in the next chapter and span into the one after. Love your comments. Thank you!
Poor Rose, she's be lucky if she's not been rendered infertile or unable to enjoy sex. Jimmy Stone has pushed the Doctor over the edge with this; he has no idea what he has awakened in the Time Lord. Can't wait to see it happen to the scum and his wee gang!
Author's Response: The Doctor is raging for sure. I can’t wait for you to see what happens next! Thank you for commenting. Makes my day.
Poor Rose! I can only hope it's nothing permanent. No wonder she's blocked the whole ordeal out. Jimmy Stone has definitely just had his fate sealed. Karma will definitely be a bitch, I'm thinking!
Author's Response: There’s still one more thing the Doctor discovers about what happend to Rose and then it’s payback! Luved the comments. Thanks so much!
so glad to see that Rose is on the mend and that the Doctor has forgiven his jeopardy girl. Sweet reunion! Now, on to some Jimmy bashing! A Black Hole will do for him, lol.
Author's Response: A wee peek ahead…the Doctor doesn’t yet know all that has happened to Rose. Payback is coming but not til he figures it out. Thank you for commenting. Much appreciated!
Great rescue, the Doctor and Jackie. Poor Rose! I can hardly wait to see what the Doctor has in store for Jimmy and his gang. I'm thinking it wont be pretty!
Author's Response: Oh yeah, payback is coming and it’s gonna be a bitch! Thanks for commenting and following this story. I really appreciate it.
So Jimmy Stone has reappeared to give Rose grief. He'll find out what trouble really is when the Doctor gets ahold of him. Love the interaction with Jackie!
Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted to bring Jackie to the fore in this story and yes Jimmy Stone picked the wrong person to mess with. Thanks so much for commenting.
Jimmy Stone. Oddly enough, that's what I call someone in my mind that I think is despicable.
Author's Response: Too true! There are too many of them. Thanks for commenting.
Oh oh, putting her out, is he, or is it just a way to scare her? Can't wait to see how this plays out.
Author's Response: Poor Rose! Does seem drastic but the Doctor has limits. Stay tuned please! Thanks so much for commenting.
Poor Rose, can’t wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting and I’m glad you’re eager for more. I’ll post twice a week so you won’t have too long to wait. Cheers
Intriging beginning! Can't wait to see how the Doctor is going to handle this!
Author's Response: Delighted you’re intrigued! Thanks so much for commenting. I’ll be posting twice a week and the story is finished!