Reviews For The Last Straw

2021.12.03 - 01:31AM
7: Chapter 7

Poor Rose, remembering will help her to move on, but it will be so painful for her to remember. Also, there are the physical injuries to deal with and now, an infection. Thank goodness the Doctor saved her in time.

Jimmy Stone and his worthless gang don't know the hurt they are in for when the Doctor catches them. You can run, boys, but you can't hide!

Thank you for another amazing chapter! Take care! ^_^

Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed this chapter. I promise more drama ahead! Between Jackie and Rose the Doctor is busy! You take care and stay safe!

2021.12.03 - 01:02AM
6: Chapter 6

The Doctor and Jackie have a mutual admiration society going on and I love it! Rose's reaction to getting her key back was, indeed, odd. Unfortunately, it looks as if the trauma she went through has her suffering from PTSD. I hope that with the Doctor and Jackie's help she will overcome it.

I like how this chapter started out upbeat and towards the end got darker. What the Doctor told Jackie at the end sent a cold chill down my spine. Great work!

I hope you're doing well and staying safe. We're getting our Covid boosters, along with the flu shot, on 12/10. Crossing my fingers that it works against Omicron. Please take care of yourself! ^_^

Author's Response: I’m pleased this story has got your interest! All this happening to Rose after the Doctor leaves her behind. You can imagine the cauldron of emotions brewing within the Doctor. Oh that’s such good news about your boosters. They’ve announced we can book ours starting Dec. 13 so I’ll be on line! Take care!

2021.12.02 - 10:51AM
11: Chapter 11

I just got caught up with chapter 10 and 11. I loved the Doctor's "come to Jesus" meeting with the Scooby Doo gang. Although I would have loved to see him let go of Jimmy, I'm glad he showed restraint. And the ordeal must have done something to him, for now he's willing to talk about their relationship! I look forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Oh good, I wanted to know what you thought of chapter 10! The Doctor is rethinking everything since he almost lost Rose. Thanks so much for commenting!

2021.11.29 - 02:02AM
5: Chapter 5

I'm glad the Doctor is going to take Rose back. He needs her just as much, maybe even more, as she needs him. I'm wondering how far the Doctor will go in doling out his punishment to Jimmy Stone and his gang. Maybe a Family of Blood style punishment? Scarecrow Jimmy Stone FTW!

I hope you're staying healthy and safe, especially with Omicron spreading like wildfire. Thanksgiving was nice and peaceful. A respite from all the craziness going on in the world. Please take care of yourself and be careful!! ^_^

Author's Response: The Doctor was fooling himself he could abandon Rose! But he doesn’t realize for awhile all that has been done to Rose. When it comes to the payback…well I can’t wait to hear what you think. I’m glad you had a nice peaceful Thanksgiving. Tonight they announced two cases of Omicron in my province. Fingers crossed our vaccines work against it! I’m doing fine though. You guys take care too. Cheers

2021.11.27 - 03:24AM
10: Chapter 10

Perfect revenge! I gotta admit, I love when the Doctor gets angry. As long as, of course, it's not directed at me.

Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your reaction because I really worked on this chapter. Me too, I luv me some pissed off Doctor! ;-)

2021.11.25 - 05:10AM
9: Chapter 9

And so it begins! It's batter up time for the Doctor. I hope he hits Jimmy out of the park and into another dimension! (Sorry to be late with the review but I've been busy reading my new Outlander book., and just now checked Tsp.)

Author's Response: I’m happy to get any reviews but to compete with Outlander, hey it’s a good day! Thank you so much! Yep, the Doctor is going to be Jimmy’s worst nightmare! Thanks again!

2021.11.25 - 12:48AM
4: Chapter 4

The Doctor and Jackie make a formidable team (I just adore Jackie to bits!). I'm so glad they were able to rescue Rose before it was too late. Herion is one nasty drug. I'm not surprised that Stone and his gang are into it.

Your descriptions in this chapter were so vivid. Sometimes I felt like I was there. Great job, my friend! I hope you're feeling well and staying safe. Tomorrow is Thanksgiving. We're staying home, binging shows and eating lots of food! ^_^

Author's Response: Lovely to know you’re enjoying this one. Just to give you a peek ahead, the Doctor and Jackie don’t yet know the half of what has happened to Rose! I do hope you have a peaceful Thanksgiving. The world is in such turmoil it is a time to appreciate our good fortune. Take care.

2021.11.25 - 12:34AM
3: Chapter 3

The Doctor is a complete mess without Rose and he's going to end up regenerating himself if he isn't careful. Rose doesn't seem to be doing any better judging by her messages. Jackie's call has me worried for Rose. If Jimmy Stone got his paws on Rose, who knows what he'd do to her? The key being ripped from her neck, along with the earring does not bode well.

This was one intense chapter. I loved it! ^_^

Author's Response: Oh I’m so chuffed you enjoyed it. In the face of danger to Rose the Doctor and Jackie have united! I like Jackie. She’s a blast. Thanks so much.

2021.11.21 - 02:15AM
2: Chapter 2

It's a relief they managed to escape the giant spiders (shudder). But Rose's continued flaunting of the "don't wander off" rule has finally driven the Doctor over the edge. I feel bad for Rose and wonder if the Doctor's gone too far. I suppose he had to do something. I have a feeling the consequences of this will affect them both in a negative way.

I'm completely hooked on this story and glad that I have more chapters to read! ^_^

Author's Response: Yeahhh! You’re hooked! Fair warning, rocky path ahead for our heroes but it’s a wild ride. The story is finished so I will be posting every four to five days. It’s lovely to hear from you!

2021.11.21 - 01:48AM
1: Chapter 1

The Doctor should know by now that wandering off is Rose's specialty. This time she's really in danger. Giant spiders! Eek! The only thing that would make it worse if there were clowns in the hole with her. Double eek!

Exciting start to what looks like is going to be an intense, and angst-filled, story if this first chapter is any indication. Great job! (I kept this short! Heh!) ^_^

Author's Response: Short and sweet I say! Loved it, but even more ,I’m thrilled you’re reading this one! I hope you enjoy it. Look after yourself. Cheers

2021.11.17 - 10:50PM
8: Chapter 8

I'm glad the Doctor was able to heal Rose's internal problems, and that he's going to ease her mental anguish as well. Gotta say though, letting Jackie aid and abet him in taking care of Jimmy Stone? Could be trouble!

Author's Response: Your intuition is right. There’s no chance the Doctor would allow Jackie to kill. The Doctor alone will deal with Jimmy and his gang starting in the next chapter and span into the one after. Love your comments. Thank you!

2021.11.12 - 03:00AM
7: Chapter 7

Poor Rose, she's be lucky if she's not been rendered infertile or unable to enjoy sex. Jimmy Stone has pushed the Doctor over the edge with this; he has no idea what he has awakened in the Time Lord. Can't wait to see it happen to the scum and his wee gang!

Author's Response: The Doctor is raging for sure. I can’t wait for you to see what happens next! Thank you for commenting. Makes my day.

2021.11.08 - 10:00AM
6: Chapter 6

Poor Rose! I can only hope it's nothing permanent. No wonder she's blocked the whole ordeal out. Jimmy Stone has definitely just had his fate sealed. Karma will definitely be a bitch, I'm thinking!

Author's Response: There’s still one more thing the Doctor discovers about what happend to Rose and then it’s payback! Luved the comments. Thanks so much!

2021.11.05 - 09:46PM
5: Chapter 5

so glad to see that Rose is on the mend and that the Doctor has forgiven his jeopardy girl. Sweet reunion! Now, on to some Jimmy bashing! A Black Hole will do for him, lol.

Author's Response: A wee peek ahead…the Doctor doesn’t yet know all that has happened to Rose. Payback is coming but not til he figures it out. Thank you for commenting. Much appreciated!

2021.10.30 - 04:34AM
4: Chapter 4

Great rescue, the Doctor and Jackie. Poor Rose! I can hardly wait to see what the Doctor has in store for Jimmy and his gang. I'm thinking it wont be pretty!

Author's Response: Oh yeah, payback is coming and it’s gonna be a bitch! Thanks for commenting and following this story. I really appreciate it.