This is absolutely wonderful. John Smith shines through in every word and Rose never loses her Rose-ness. In fact, I'd like to see you continue this. I'd love to see this John Smith when he realizes he's the Doctor. I hope you will write some more, whether it's to continue this or a brand new fic.
Author's Response: Thank you! This made me smile. I'm glad you found the characters believable. I do have some ideas for these two in 1913, maybe I'll write them, too, and show the glimpses of John Smith and Rose's life. Once again, thank you for your kind words.