2021.05.12 - 01:05AM
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It's nice to visit with Mariola and Nolan again. They are both so endearing and I love how their friendship with the Doctor and Rose has developed.

I wasn't a bit surprised that Jackie's wedding plans are over the top. Rose is her only daughter and now that she has money, she's going to spare no expense.

Knowing the Doctor and Rose has expanded Mariola and Nolan's world. Traveling to the parallel universe will expand it even more.

I'm so curious about what Rose wants to ask Mariola. It sounds quite serious!

Another enjoyable, fluffy chapter, which I always love. The wedding is getting closer and I'm getting excited!

I hope you're doing well and staying healthy. I got my second Covid shot on Friday. On Saturday, I woke up feeling achy and feverish. But, the next day, I was fin. I'll take vaccine side effects over Covid 19 any day! Please stay healthy and good luck with your second shot! ^_^

Author's Response: I want to give the Doctor a chance to enjoy his friends and family without the pressure of some looming disaster. Of course when trouble comes his friends are with him. Delighted you’re enjoying the fluff and thank you for commenting. I’m delighted you got both shots. I haven’t got my second shot yet but it’s scheduled! I’m glad you’ll be able to enjoy your summer!

2021.05.08 - 04:21AM
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Sounds like the wedding bash is going to be a real "knees up" affair, but I can't help but have a niggling feeling that something is about to happen. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: The Doctor gets to enjoy his extended family until the actual wedding and then stuff happens, lots of stuff! Thank you so much for the lovely comments. Makes my day!

2021.05.05 - 12:47AM
2: Chapter 2

Jack expected the worst news when the TARDIS landed in the hub. Finding the exact opposite was a fantastic surprise for him. I loved how he hung on every word as the Doctor told of the events leading up to Canary Wharf and everything that happened afterward.

Jacking wanting his own TARDIS was so like him as was his reaction the news of the Doctor and Rose's wedding. Is he going to plan the bachelor party? I can't even imagine what that would be like. The Doctor might prefer facing the Daleks!

I felt a bit melancholy when they were cleaning out Jackie's flat. That flat might have been shabby, but there was so much love in it. That love continues to grow, thanks to the Doctor. He really did give Rose and Jackie a new lease on life. I'm happy for all of them and really excited for the wedding!

This second chapter left me smiling. I know these happy times are not going to last (this is the Doctor and Rose we're talking about!), but I will enjoy until them while I can. I'm looking forward to the wedding and seeing Jackie again.

I hope you're doing okay and having great weather. The other day we had 60-70 MPH gusts that shook my house and blew half my neighbor's roof off. Then it rained a little, the sun came out and the air got really still. It was like experiencing a hurricane, eye included, in ten minutes! Yikes! Second Covid shot Friday. Woot! Please take care of yourself, stay safe and healthy! ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks Sweetie. This story begins by focusing on the Doctor coming to realize the support he has around him, the people he can rely on. Then comes the danger to his friends and family. Loved your comments, as usual. I’m doing fine and almost all my family has had first shot, whew! Wow the storm sounds like it was scary. We’ve had lovely spring rain here and things are looking much more hopeful! Take care.

2021.05.03 - 10:13AM
2: Chapter 2

so wedding plans are underway, and Jack is to be best man! Brilliant! Can't wait to see how this wedding works out. Its's sweet how the old sofa made realize just how much the Doctor had helped she and her mum find a better way. Too bad he didn't snag the thing to keep in the TARDIS for Rose. Loved Jack begging for his own TARDIS, by the way. That would be scary indeed!

Author's Response: Lovely to get your comments! The Doctor gets to enjoy the principle relationships in his life for awhile before he has to face threats. It’s a bit of a revelation for him. I hope you enjoy!

2021.05.02 - 12:10AM
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I was thrilled to see this new story from you! I started reading "Pieces of Paper" on our trip up from Florida to our new life in Pennsylvania, so it holds a very special place in my heart. I decided to refresh my memory of it and ended up rereading it; it was even better the second time around!

So much has happened in the lives of our favorite couple and so much more yet to come. I'm looking forward to the wedding on Pete's World and love Rose's idea of the Doctor having two best men. How could the Doctor choose between Jack and Mickey?

Rose's pregnancy is exciting news and it's going to be interesting to see how she handles a half-Gallifreyan child.

The threat of the terror already has me worried and I don't even know what the terror is yet! I'm already on board with this one and look forward to seeing what your creative brain has in store for the Doctor, Rose and their extended family.

I hope you're doing well and staying safe. How did things go with your vaccine shot? I get my second Covid shot next Friday, May 7. Please take care of yourself and stay healthy. And I am so happy to see you back! ^_^

Author's Response: I was thrilled to see you’d commented! First off I’m tickled you liked Pieces of Paper and I hope you’ll like this one too! I got my first vaccine and it went smoothly and I have my second scheduled. I’m so glad your second is only days away. I’m very happy for you! You’ll be able to be more at ease enjoying your summer! Take care

2021.04.29 - 12:22PM
1: Chapter 1

I just want to say that I read your gem of a story Pieces of Paper last night before starting this one, and it was great. I really enjoyed the imagination it took to come up with all the nifty techno jargon, etc. And the sex wasn't bad, either! I can't wait to read more about the Doctor's parents, and he and Rose's growing family. Well done, you!

Author's Response: Oh gosh, you’ve made my day! Coming from you it’s high praise! Thank you so much for commenting!