I'm really glad that they rescued the Yoffel from being eaten. It sounds like Jack and Ianto had another interesting night on the job. I laughed at the part where Jack was imagining Ianto without clothes on. Very funny. Those two are amazing. I love how you write them.
Author's Response: Thank you! Ianto knows Jack, and is always aware of when he's being undressed with Jack's eyes. The Yoffel will be fine. One Tosh gets her translator working with it, they can find out how to get it back home.