2010.10.18 - 03:20PM
1: Chapter 1

still reading, still enjoying!

2006.06.25 - 11:45AM
14: Chapter 14

Fantastic!

2006.05.24 - 11:01AM
14: Chapter 14

*applause* A satisfying ending to a very exciting story. I look forward to reading more of your work.

2006.05.22 - 11:56AM
12: Chapter 12

I'm just more and more impressed with the level of jeopardy you're delivering. The main characters didn't get far, but you've certainly supplied them with a good reason to run faster.

2006.05.20 - 09:33PM
10: Chapter 10

What a great cliffhanger, and the whole was very gripping. This is getting better all the time.

2006.05.19 - 07:21PM
9: Chapter 9

This is getting much better as you proceed. I'm really enjoying the quality of your writing.

2006.05.11 - 12:22PM
1: Chapter 1

Still enjoying this story immensely. More, please!

2006.05.11 - 10:54AM
1: Chapter 1

A promising beginning. Poor Jasmine is in for it, isn't she?