*applause* A satisfying ending to a very exciting story. I look forward to reading more of your work.
I'm just more and more impressed with the level of jeopardy you're delivering. The main characters didn't get far, but you've certainly supplied them with a good reason to run faster.
What a great cliffhanger, and the whole was very gripping. This is getting better all the time.
This is getting much better as you proceed. I'm really enjoying the quality of your writing.
Still enjoying this story immensely. More, please!
A promising beginning. Poor Jasmine is in for it, isn't she?