Reviews For Failed

2020.11.12 - 06:55AM
1: Chapter 1

Wow. I feel so sorry for Jack. I know that he blames himself for what happened to Grey but he shouldn't. He was just a boy and it wasn't his fault. It's just like him that even after everything that Grey put him through that he still hasn't given up on him and still wants to help him. Such a dark and emotional story. I love it.

Author's Response: Jack really shouldn't blame himself and yet it's inevitable that he would just because he was so young at the time and his father wasn't there to tell him it WASN'T his fault. He should never have been put in that position. But he still loves his brother... Thank you!