Wow. This is an amazing chapter. The scenes with Jack and the Doctor were so intense and hot and absolutely perfect! I also love the end of the story where they have to run off because the cops were coming. I really enjoyed this and I hope that you write more stories!
Author's Response: Thank you. I loved writing these scenes. In fact, this chapter was the first one I wrote of this story, so I'm especially happy that you enjoyed it. It wouldn't be DW if they didn't have to run, at some point. ;) Don't worry, I'll keep on writing. :)
I'm glad that they found out what was killing and children and that Jack was able to send the aliens back home. It's too bad that he had to die. I'm glad that the Doctor told Jack how he hates it when he dies and how much it bothers him. It's got to be hard on both of them. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: It was rather simple in the end, I was a bit worried, that it would be too simple, so I'm double glad, that you liked it. The Doctor had to finally admit to his feelings, as best as he could, at least, but Jack got the point. He will still continue to sacrifice himself, if it means saving someone else, he wouldn't be Jack otherwise. ^^ I hope you'll like it. :)
I love Jack and the Doctor in this and how they're more close to each other in a romantic way with the kissing and everything- or at least attempting too if the Doctor is giving Jack mixed signals. I wonder why but I guess I'll probably find out later. Great start. I'm so curious what's going to happen next.
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know, that you like the story, so far. He's the Doctor and he's great at giving mixed signals, when it comes to romance. ^^ You'll find out on Friday, at least I've promised myself to post the next chapter, then.