Hmm... This is getting really interesting. Lucy woke up but she's having some kind of ghost-like out of body experience. I wasn't expecting that. Very clever. I really like this chapter because you have the Doctor and the Master talking to each other and it's interesting to see how they interact with each other when they think Lucy's not there. Well, she is there but you know what I mean. Hopefully the Master can help her wake up. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: That's the good thing about the DW universe. It gives you enough space for strange ideas like that. *giggle* I really wanted to have those two have a uh... private conversation. Glad you liked it :3