2019.10.27 - 03:45PM
1: Chapter 1

Very nice and well written. You really capture the characters for who they are! Thank you. :>))

2019.10.27 - 03:08AM
1: Chapter 1

First, and I've said this before, I adore Jackie. And Tony!

Second, The Pile™ was brilliant! Took me back to when I was a child (when dinosaurs roamed the earth!) and that first play day after the first big windstorm in autumn, and all the leaves were gathered under one of the sycamore trees, and we would play for hours and hours...

Lastly, and I know I've said it before, but especially now, with the current contretemps over a certain piece of fiction and a name and all of it, I do so love how you write these two. He is the Doctor and she is Rose. He may have only one heart now, but he loves her enough for both himself and his two-hearted version across the Void. It will ever be thus.

Well done!