2019.03.29 - 07:36AM
25: Chapter 25

Just finished this wonderful epic story. You have a very creative imagination and kept me on the edge of my seat quite often. Such a different experience with that sick Dalek.
Love the bonded relationship, the Doctor in love is so Yummy. Loved all the sexy times, he is quite the romantic.
I will look forward to any further stories you send our way. Thanks for this very exciting tale!! It is always interesting when an Eternal stops by.

Author's Response: Thank you for such lovely comments! Youíve made my day! Reactions like yours keep us going so thanks for reading my story and taking the time to comment!

2019.03.28 - 07:44PM
25: Chapter 25

I can't believe it's all over! It was such a fantastic story that I didn't want it to end. Well, I did want to see a happy ending, but I wanted it to carry on (Gah, I sound like the Doctor!) because I've fallen in love with this verse.

You really packed a punch in this final chapter, from the nail-biting start to the sublime ending. And you actually made me cry for a Dalek! That's definitely a first. I had a giggle at Rose going into the void ship and Jack automatically assuming the books were Gallifreyan porn. So typically Jack! Rose understanding Gallifreyan is an intersting development, too.

Thank you so much for posting yet another amazing story. You have such talent and I can't wait to see what you come up with next! ^_^

Author's Response: Ahhh, youíre making me tear up now with your kind words! Seriously Sweetie, I am so glad you enjoyed it. I am writing another so stay tuned and thanks again!

2019.03.24 - 07:22PM
24: Chapter 24

Jack seems way more on the ball than the Doctor. Probably because the latter is so worried about Rose. I am, too! I keep trying to picture the inside of the void ship. Definitely makes me think of Wonder Woman's plane. I can see Rose feeling guilty about not telling the Doctor about the Dalek, but how in the world could she break that news to him without him going all On Coming Storm?

It's got to be tough to be the Doctor and have to always be the one in charge to have to put on a brave front all the time. Although, if he loses Rose, the breakdown he'd most likely have might very well destroy him.

Aw, I'm glad the Doctor will let Rose bring the Dalek on to the TARDIS. I'm still a bit worried, not so much about what the Dalek will do, but what the ones on the ship might have done to him, like maybe like a incendiary device or somethine equally deadly. I hope not!

Oh man, that ending! You really know how to craft a cliffhanger. As always, a great chapter!





Author's Response: Iím so glad you enjoyed this chapter. Itís rewarding to hear your reactions and thanks for following my story. Tomorrow I post the next and last chapter of this story but of course their story continues!

2019.03.17 - 01:56PM
23: Chapter 23

Even with his worries about Rose, the Doctor still wants to show Jack how beautiful the universe is. I agree what you wrote about joy. Often the little things we find can bring us the most unbelievable joy.

I'm glad the planet transport occurred without a hitch. Yeah, Jack, I'm wondering how the scientist on other planets reacted to the sight. Now that it's done, all attention is on Rose and how to rescue her. The Doctor is heading very close to Oncoming Storm territory. The Daleks better watch out!

The description of the void ship makes sense. It's there, but not there. Sort of. I like the way Rose gained help from the injured Dalek. Although, I'm still not convinced about how trustworthy it is. Jack's alarm has me very, very anxious. What a cliffhanger!

Author's Response: Always a pleasure to hear from you. Itís encouraging to know people are following. Only two chapters left and my story will be finished. Thank you so much!

2019.03.14 - 08:55PM
23: Chapter 23

I'm still hovering, lol. I decided to wait and binge it all when it is finished!!!

Author's Response: Oh, thanks for letting me know. Fingers crossed youíll like it then! Cheers

2019.03.09 - 05:56PM
22: Chapter 22

I can understand how conflicted the Doctor is over healing the Dalek. Of course, he'd direct the anger towards himself. Rose is smart to just let work out his feelings. She's also right that tea and biscuits should help him. I know they help me!

Why am I not surprised that something happened with the booster rocket? Injured or not, that Dalek should not be trusted. I was hoping Rose and Jack could fix it before the void ship arrived. I should have know that wouldn't happen. Now Rose is on the void ship and she seems safe, so far. I'm glad she's keeping her wits about her because I have a feeling the Doctor is on the verge of losing his. Another great chapter!

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Our heroes are facing great danger and the point of no return! Iím thrilled you are still on board and letting me know your reactions!

2019.03.09 - 05:42PM
21: Chapter 21

Doctor, stop annoying the TARDIS! She's probably worried enough about the three of you as it is. Still, poor Doctor must be, not just physically, but mentally exhausted. Aw, I love Rose's note for him and I also like her dream. I like the second dream even more!

Now, though, the action is really starting to ramp up. I'm glad Rose listened to the Doctor in regards to her wearing the armor. OMG! Jack kissing the Doctor. Too funny! But, then that Dalek turning up. Wounded or not, it has me worried. I'm surprised the Doctor showed any compassion for it. I don't like Rose turning her back on it as she left. I'm so worried that something is going to happen to her.

I'm sorry that I don't always review right away. Sometimes I like to think over the latest chapter before reviewing and other times I get completely side-tracked. This time was a combination of both.

Author's Response: Honestly I am so happy you respond to the story and let me know what you think I could hardly take issue with when! Thank you for taking the time to comment. Best regards!

2019.02.24 - 06:46PM
20: Chapter 20

So much going on in this chapter. I loved it! Regarding the Doctor's plan: I'm glad he gave the the simple explanation because any more and I'd be confused. I don't know how you come up with these great ideas. Are you sure you're not a Time Lord? When Rose first felt dizzy, I thought, "Oh no, she's pregnant!" I can't even imagine how the Doctor would have reacted to that. Probably role her up in bubble wrap to keep her safe! Instead, we find out that she's a seer. I'm starting to think she might be more powerful than the Doctor. I guess time will tell. I love how all three of them are trying to figure out exactly what Rose's cryptic message meant. They really do work well together. Another great chapter. You really do know how to tell an intriguing story!

Author's Response: Oh wow thatís high praise. Iím thrilled youíre enjoying it! Thanks to you I am over the moon!

2019.02.24 - 06:24PM
19: Chapter 19

Poor clueless Doctor! I'm glad Jack was there to help him understand why Rose was so upset. Rose didn't back down and got some answers that she sorely needed. Good for her, too, coming right out asking about Reinette (I've got so many issues with that episode). I like how they made up! Of course, there was enough time for that. I thought it was amusing that Jack, of all people, would even question that! I'm happy that the Doctor did take it literally.

Author's Response: Your insights are brilliant and youíre right about Jack but I do think heís happy for the Doctor and the Doctor trusted Jack to unravel how his words hurt Rose. Course Rose, in her own way, is tough. Sheís such a good match for the Doctor. Thanks luv!

2019.02.18 - 03:31PM
18: Chapter 18

I'm glad they made it back to the TARDIS in one piece. Even with all he's gone through, the Doctor still manages to stay in control of the situation and Jack should know better than to question his motives. He's just coming off a severe injury and the Doctor wants sex. Typical man! Haha! A second ark. I didn't seen that coming. And the Doctor just doesn't know when to shut up. Rose is not happy. I think the Doctor might be safer going up against demented Daleks than facing the wrath of an angry Rose! Another excellent chapter; the next one should be very interesting.

Author's Response: Thanks! Iím delighted you enjoyed the chapter. Next chapter is up tomorrow. It always makes my day to get your comments.

2019.02.15 - 04:12PM
13: Chapter 13

Interesting lecture on stress and fear from our Doctor. A mirror for our times, as is usually the case in DW.

Author's Response: Too true! Poor Doctor has a lot of experience with fear and stress. I enjoyed your insight. Thanks so much!

2019.02.15 - 02:31PM
4: Chapter 4

Saving the universe as an act of love...
This is a philosophy that I can get down with. 😊
I am interested to see where this thought experiment goes in terms of an alternative timeline. And I'm excited to find out what powers Rose may possess.

Author's Response: Youíve foreshadowed a theme in the next chapter. Well done Joan Redfern! Seriously I very much appreciated your comments. Best Regards

2019.02.13 - 03:40PM
17: Chapter 17

I had to read this chapter twice because it was that good! I got a good laugh with the Doctor's whirling about; shouting, "I have a gift!". But, after that, things got very, very serious. The Doctor! OMG! I was so worried about him regenerating or, even worse, dying. I'm so glad Jack was there with the handy hand. Whew! That cliffhanger... you sure know how to get my adrenaline flowing! Great work, as always. I'm looking forward to what happens next.

Author's Response: I am so thrilled you found it good enough to read twice. Wow, thanks so much for making my day my dear!

2019.02.06 - 08:21PM
16: Chapter 16

Mssss. Hartman sure left in a huff (thanks to the Doctor!). Although, Jack is right, she's covering her butt. I can understand how, after many years, the Doctor can be unnerved by Daleks; I'm still unnerved by clowns. *Shudder* Rose can always be counted on to calm the Doctor, she knows just what to say to him. The conversation between him and Sec brought me back to the argument between the Daleks and the Cyberman. One of the few really funny parts of Doomsday. Oh, that cliffhanger! Yikes!



Author's Response: Delighted as always to hear from you! It makes my day. I enjoy reading about the parts you enjoyed. Clowns donít affect me but you know what, I get why theyíre creepy! Thanks for following my story Oriana1

2019.02.04 - 11:48AM
15: Chapter 15

I was very pleased to find your story. I hope there is more to come because it is very well written.

Author's Response: Thank you. I am glad youíre enjoying it and yes, the next chapter will be posted today. Thanks for taking the time to comment.