This Daryl just gets curiouser And curiouser and not in a good way. I have a feeling he's got more than one suitcase full of bodies. Good for Rose for finding the camera. I wonder just how many ol' Daryl's got hidden around the place? I echo the other reviewers, get out NOW!
Author's Response: I know eh, but those two never get out NOW and no doubt thatís why they never get a decent vacation! Thank you for your comments. They mean a lot to me. Next post tomorrow!
The creep factor just went up a few notches, but at lease Rose saw the camera, so hopefully, they will be on their toes. I yelled at them again to get in the TARDIS and go, but they aren't listening!
Author's Response: I know! Those two never listen. Honestly itís a thrill to me that youíre still following my story. Thank you for taking the time to comment!
This isn't creeping me out at all! No, not at all! Just...get in the TARDIS and go. Now!
Author's Response: I know eh? Theyíre like people in old horror movies that go down the stairs to the dark basement! Totally chuffed to get your comments.
I just read this in one go and I am truly creeped out by Daryl. Everything about him screams for the Doctor to grab Rose and RUN!!! Ewwww, what was in the suitcase? What a perv, I'm afraid for our babies.
You have for sure captured my interest.
Author's Response: Letís just say the suitcase doesnít contain wild game and when have those two ever been sensible about danger. I am delighted to get your comments . You made my day!
The cabin sounds lovely. But... Daryl is creeping me out, big time! Ew! I'm glad the Doctor saw the stuff in his truck. I just hope the Doctor can disable the cameras before Creepzilla films anything. What was in the suitcase? I don't think it was wild game parts. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Ahhh no it wasnít wild game in the suitcase! Love your comments and I wonít keep you waiting. I will post tomorrow.
Wonderful first chapter of what I'm sure is going to be yet another amazing story from you. Autumn in the mountains! Something I can relate to! Both Rose and the Doctor could use a break. But, Daryl sounds properly creepy! I wonder if he's got a brother named Larry and another brother named Daryl?
Author's Response: I laughed at the Daryl, Daryl and Larry reference. I know it! Thank you for your kind encouragement. I do hope you enjoy this one.
Hmmm, I'm intrigued. You're off to a great start; I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Oh my, I am thrilled to get a comment from you. Iíve read many of your stories. I remember actually being scared what would happen next in Motel Hell. Thanks for the encouragement!