2018.10.19 - 03:35AM
7: Chapter 7

Oh my! That was so hot! *fans self* I'm so happy that they're now bonded. Pity that after such a joyful interlude, they have to deal with creepy Daryl. I hate him.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Our duo are over the top in all things thank goodness. This business with Daryl is going to have to be faced! Love your comments.

2018.10.19 - 03:21AM
6: Chapter 6

Oh God, the thought of the Doctor looking forward in time and finding out Rose was one of Daryl's victims... I can't even imagine what that would do to him. I'm so glad he's already got a tracking device on Rose and even better that he's got three ways to track her. The thought of Daryl snooping about their room is beyond creepy. Ugh. I'm glad the Doctor set up some cameras of his own.

Oh, but how wonderfully romantic Rose has made her room. I'm looking forward the bonding of our dynamic duo!

Author's Response: Thank you so much Oriana1. Always appreciate your take as our duo face their challenges whether itís getting together or facing the monsters!

2018.10.19 - 01:02AM
5: Chapter 5

I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. We're still using Verizon's data and it has barely been working. We're getting internet on 10/26 and I'll finally be on line full-time again. Yay!

Rose teasing the Doctor about having a sex doll gave me a bit of a laugh. I just hope he can fix the programming on the cyborg because the thought of Rose being a decoy has me very nervous.
I definitely think that Daryl is a serial killer; I agree with Laurie Spitzer regarding the Bad Samaritan vibe. I think that sicko Daryl could give Cale Erendreich a run for his money!


Author's Response: I am so glad youíre back. I missed your comments. Sorry about the connection problems. I canít wait for you to catch up and thank you for sticking with my story.

2018.10.18 - 04:05AM
8: Chapter 8

Oh NOOOOOOOOOO, not both of them! How can the Doctor save his Rose if he is out too. Although.......isn't the Doctor able to neutralize poisons? Will that dart actually cause him harm?? I absolutely can't wait till you fix this!!
They were so happy and looking forward to their honeymoon and then wham!! That bastard has hurt our babies. Your imagination is in overdrive for sure. Now I'm scared what evil you may put them through... Will it get lots worse before it gets better???? EEEKKKKKK. I don't want to think about it....

Author's Response: I do so enjoy your comments! Thanks for following my story! It will not be long before you find out what happens next. I promise!

2018.10.18 - 12:26AM
8: Chapter 8

Oh man, that was certainly a twist. Both of them down and in the clutches of Daryl! Don't keep us waiting too long!

Author's Response: I really appreciate your comments. Three four days max and I will post the next chapter. Thanks so much for sticking with my story!

2018.10.18 - 12:17AM
7: Chapter 7

That was certainly a very hot interlude! They are finally a bonded couple, with all that title conveys. It's sad that after having experienced such bliss that they have to stop now and go take care of that perverted creep!

Author's Response: True dat! They never seem to get a break but at least there are a few more ahem...perks than before! Thanks so much for commenting.

2018.10.18 - 12:06AM
6: Chapter 6

Sorry for the late review, but I'm just catching up on all my reading. Just want to say, wow! Can't wait for next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, itís lovely to have you back and thanks for the review.

2018.10.14 - 04:25AM
7: Chapter 7

GUH, I can't breathe now!!! That was super sexy with an extra dose of sexy thrown in. You have quite an imagination, you had them doing stuff that must be illegal in many countries!! Those two are so freaking hot.
Love that she is in his mind now and he is in hers. He is no longer alone in his mind and that is really really HUGE for him. I am so happy for them, will they have their forever now? Uhhh, hate to bring this up but what about uneven time lines? Omg you have to fix that!! After what they have just shared they should have their happy ever after forever and ever.
Good grief, I was having so much fun I almost forgot we have a super demented perv on the loose. Darn, guess we have to get back to the real world next chapter. Welllll it was perfect while it lasted.

Author's Response: OMG. You make me chuckle. First thanks so much for your comments. I am glad you enjoyed. I canít tell you too much about next chapter but it wonít be long. Thanks again

2018.10.09 - 11:15PM
6: Chapter 6

WOW!! This is a very sexy chapter and the last part of it is scorching hot!!! Ugh, I am without words right now. Rose is a very lucky girl, just saying...
So glad the Doctor smelled that jerk and saw that he had been in the cabin. Keep ahead of him Doctor, keep your Rose safe.
Back to the romance, lovely dialogue between them, I'm so glad they want a physical relationship. I really hope the become forever bonded. And I really really hope you won't spring some Doomsday events on us at the end.
Great sweet update!

Author's Response: Ahhh, thank you! I really appreciate your comment. They truly get together in the next chapter, this is the lead up. I am of the view that these two should not be separated...ever! Thanks for making my day!

2018.10.06 - 12:44PM
5: Chapter 5

My bad. The dolly is from the future, not the past. So she's a couple of millennia old, and it was probably Ten that picked her up. Naughty Doctor!

Author's Response: Tsk, tsk, Doctor Ten wouldnít do that, would he? Thanks so much.

2018.10.06 - 12:41PM
5: Chapter 5

So Rose wants to be bait. Thank goodness for irritable cyborg sex dolls, lol. I wonder which Doctor had to save the bloody thing 200 years ago! Still. if it works...I have a Bad Samaritan type vibe about this bad guy; I hope he doesn't get his hands on Rose. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: So glad youíve felt that Bad Samaritan vibe! I had fun with the cyborg. Thanks so much for your comments. They make my day!

2018.10.06 - 03:54AM
5: Chapter 5

Ok, I admit, you are the queen of cliffis!! Is Daryl going to see inside the TARDIS? And he fixed the bathroom camera, will he perv on Rose when she showers?? This is just EWWWWW. I sure do hope our clever Doctor will keep one step ahead of that creep.
I had to laugh out loud, the Doctor with a sex doll. Oh the vision that

Author's Response: Your comments made me laugh...thanks so much for taking the time. Glad you liked the sex doll bit....er Cyborg. One reveal...Rose wonít set foot in that bathroom! Thanks so much for your comments.

Author's Response: Your comments made me laugh...thanks so much for taking the time. Glad you liked the sex doll bit....er Cyborg. One reveal...Rose wonít set foot in that bathroom! Thanks so much for your comments.

2018.10.03 - 10:50PM
4: Chapter 4

What a sweet little interlude. Until that mood killer! I actually lost my breath for a moment when the Doctor said, "Rose, he asked if you were blonde!" Eek! (It doesn't help that I'm blonde, too!) I'm going to be a nervous wreck waiting for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Very happy to hear from you and since I was aiming for suspense I am thrilled your comments confirmed it. I will be posting within two days. Thanks so much!

2018.10.02 - 04:00AM
4: Chapter 4

Well that was an abrupt departure from the mood they had created! I can only imagine what's going to happen next!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for commenting. This story is dark but the light comes from their developing relationship. But that raises the stakes. Thanks again for following my story.

2018.10.01 - 09:32PM
4: Chapter 4

OMG, you absolutely CANT leave it there? What is he going to do? And they were having such a lovely time, him thinking of all sorts of romantic thoughts. You sure know how to kill a mood!!
Good grief I don't know how I will be able to wait till you post again.

Author's Response: Sorry about the cliffie and the mood kill but our babies will be sizzling together soon. Promise I will post again this week. Loved your comments and thanks so much.