2018.11.19 - 02:23PM
12: Chapter 12

After the first chapter I decided to wait until I could read the whole thing at once as a treat. So glad I did! Wonderful pacing and great job building suspense throughout. Loved the ending too!

Author's Response: So sorry I didnít respond earlier. What a lovely compliment. Thank you for taking the time to comment. I really appreciate it!

2018.11.07 - 06:31PM
12: Chapter 12

What a great ending! Lillibet! Too funny! The part with Samantha made me tear up. The Doctor was so sweet and gentle with her. He really does have a way with kids. I also loved Rose and the wolves. Aw, the Doctor will get to live his very long life with Rose, after all. The Doctor showing up to give guidance to President Sam Dunbar, and her total trust in her, was a wonderful way to end this tale.

BTW, I didn't see the notification for this last chapter until yesterday. How perfect that was it was November 6, Election Day. I only wish we had been able to elect Samantha Dunbar!

Author's Response: I am so glad you liked the story and thank you for following my story from the start. I really appreciate it! As for the ending what can I say, I like happy endings and see no reason why I canít have them!

2018.11.03 - 02:20AM
12: Chapter 12

What a great ending, matching timelines!!! And omg Lillibet, what a hoot!! Our Doctor, bless his wonderful hearts.
I have thoroughly enjoyed this story, even when you had me scared to death on the edge of my seat!!
Hurry back to us with another wonderful tale about our Doctor and his bondmate Rose.

Author's Response: Iíve gotten the biggest kick out of your comments. What a hoot! Thanks so much for following my story and I am delighted you liked the ending and the matching timelines wink wink! I am writing another story but itíll be a few weeks. Thanks for making my day!

2018.11.03 - 02:11AM
12: Chapter 12

Lillibet indeed, lol. A gripping and emotional ending to a brilliant tale. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! I have looked forward to your comments throughout and appreciated that you stuck with my story. Since endings are important this is high praise.!

2018.10.30 - 07:10PM
11: Chapter 11

I'm happy that Rose and the Doctor patched things up. Poor Doctor, it's got to be hard to know that you can't save someone, not matter how much you want to. He really does have the weight of the universe on his shoulders. I'm looking forward to the happy honeymoon!

Author's Response: Youíre so right, in many ways the Doctor is a tragic figure! Thatís why he shouldnít be without Rose. I always look forward to your comments. Thank you.

2018.10.30 - 06:36PM
10: Chapter 10

That was intense! I think the Doctor moved from being the Oncoming Storm to the Oncoming Tsunami! Daryl definitely deserved what he got. I do feel bad about his childhood and wonder what he'd have been like if things had been different. Still, no matter what he went through, it doesn't excuse his actions as an adult. Those poor women didn't deserve to be tortured and killed (RIP, Sally Dunbar). I'm just glad that Rose wasn't another victim. I'm anxious about the next chapter and the fallout from the Doctor not saving Sally. I hope he can make Rose understand.

Author's Response: I am delighted to get your encouraging comments. Fear not, chapter 11 is already posted for you! Thanks so much for following my story. I appreciate it!

2018.10.30 - 06:33PM
11: Chapter 11

Lots of angst there for a while but you patched it all up beautifully. Rose should have known the Doctor would never ever let someone die unless he had no other choice.
I'm really really glad the jerk has been dealt with, hope he will never see the light of day again, he is so terribly broken and can't be repaired. Whew! He didn't touch Rose. So glad of that.
On to happier time now. They are so incredibly wonderful together, love love love this!

Author's Response: Oh your comments are lovely and so encouraging for me to read. Thank you for taking the time to let me know. Last chapter will be up in next few days.

2018.10.30 - 04:04AM
11: Chapter 11

Ah, I'm glad Rose saw it the Doctor's way once he had a chance to explain things, as I had hoped she would. And their wee interlude was hot! Now for the honeymoon! Well done!

Author's Response: Ahhh so glad youíre relieved. Those two belong together in all universes! Thank you so much for commenting and following my story. Next chapter will be up in a few days.

2018.10.30 - 04:03AM
11: Chapter 11

Ah, I'm glad Rose saw it the Doctor's way once he had a chance to explain things, as I had hoped she would. And their wee interlude was hot! Now for the honeymoon! Well done!

2018.10.28 - 01:22AM
10: Chapter 10

I can't believe Rose would turn on the Doctor so quickly, even after all the horrors she'd witnessed so recently. Still, I'm sure she will come around and see that what the Doctor did for Sally was give her mercy in her last moments. A very emotional chapter; and I'm glad Daryl has been stopped.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting. Itís a treat and makes my day! I know what you mean about Rose but sometimes she expects the Doctor to save the day when he canít usually when facing trauma. But in the end their aims are true. Thanks again for commenting!

2018.10.27 - 05:47AM
10: Chapter 10

I swear, I had goose bumps as that ass was walking down the stairs in the dark!! Just like a horror movie!! The Doctor really surprised me with his reaction, he totally went all Oncoming Storm all over Daryl. I wasn't expecting him to react quite so.... Much. But I'm glad he did. That creep tried to hurt his Rose and he would do anything it takes to protect her.
Well he had it bad as a kid, that part is very sad because that is realistic in our world. There are so many really sick individuals who were severely abused as children. But. I don't think that gives him reason to commit the crimes he has done. What a tangled mess.
Thank you so much for the update. I hope this doesn't mean you are getting near the end of this great story, now that the Doctor and Rose are safe.

Author's Response: Yes youíre quite right this is an ugly mess for the Doctor, in part because he canít fix it. All he can do is protect Rose and future victims. I enjoyed your comments very much. There are a few more chapters left. Thanks for following my story.

2018.10.23 - 04:42AM
9: Chapter 9

Well that got my heart pumping! What an advantage to have a Time Lord handy if one gets kidnapped by a psychoric perv. Can't wait for the fight!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for commenting and youíre so right. Always keep a Time Lord nearby I always say! Showdown in the next chapter! Thanks for following my story.

2018.10.23 - 02:15AM
9: Chapter 9

This is a very realistic and very scary story, like something you would see in a movie or on TV. How the heck have you got us in your grip, scaring us to death!! And....grossing us out. He took Rose's jeans off?? Ewww. Sick bastard. The Doctor may not have a gun but I'm thinking he is going to do some setious damage to that perv when he gets ahold of him. Poor Rose, she wanted to help catch the perv, well she led the Doctor right to him but she will be so embarrassed to find out she was chained up pants less. Can't wait to see what The Oncoming Storm has in store for that sick wacko.
Thank goodness for all of the tracking he set up for his Rose!!
Excellent chapter even if you left us with another freaking CLIFFIE!!!

Author's Response: I got the biggest charge from your comment. It made me laugh and it was delightful. Next chapter is the showdown and thanks so much for taking the time to comment!

2018.10.22 - 01:04AM
9: Chapter 9

I'm so glad I didn't have to wait long for an update. Thank you! And what an update it was! My heart was pounding after I got the email alert. So glad the Doctor was able to metabolize the tranquilizer. Doctor and TARDIS to the rescue! Poor Rose. I hope that disgusting sub-human didn't hurt her. I love that she's not going to leave the Doctor, no matter what he wants her to do. He really should know better by now. Oh, and another cliffhanger! I hope next chapter, Daryl is hanging from a cliff!

Author's Response: I am so glad you liked this chapter. I greatly enjoy your comments. Next chapter is the showdown! Thanks again for your encouragement!

2018.10.19 - 03:52AM
8: Chapter 8

No! No! Nooo! This can't be happening! This isn't fair! That POS Daryl will have hell to pay if he puts a hand on our babies! I should not have read this right before going to bed. Sob...

Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting. Youíre caught up now and the showdown with Daryl is coming!