The Time Garden was a great idea and one where the Doctor could be romantic and prove himself to Rose...enjoyed the bit of rebellious students trying to make changes peacefully.
This was so worth the wait. Has it really been a year since the last chapter? Now I truly feel guilty.
The Time Garden is such a brilliant concept to remind Rose who the Doctor is, what he's capable of, and that he can be romantic if he makes the effort. And I loved the identity crisis Rose went through (because you know I love to torment my characters a bit, too). I can barely wait for the next chapter.
The explanation was brilliant with the notion of two Doctors and two Roses, but still anxious about whether or not they will be able to leave this world...wonderful update.
Ok, I have a lot of theories as to what just happened, but I'm happy to be on pins and needles to find out. Soon, I hope. :)
Author's Response: I hope so too. :) Iím scribbling away at it!! Thanks again, Iím always delighted to hear from you!
Whew!! That was a close one. :-D
Author's Response: Poor Doctor, heís always hated feeling indebted to Rickey lol. Thank you for reading <3 <3 <3
Something doesn't appear alright to me but the Doctor is okay and giddy but now Rose doesn't have a reflection! I am sure the clues were laid out clearly but I am clueless but so hooked and anxious...thanks for posting.
Author's Response: Well, I may have laid out clues but I really didnít explain anything, so I donít blame you for being confused! :) But yes, the Doctor is giddy for good reason and all will be explained in the next update. Thank you for reading!
I keep meaning (and keep forgetting) to comment on your story. I love it! The story is so well thought out and I feel like I'm on the edge of my seat as I'm reading it. I love Twelve's internal monologue - how much he wants, but knows he shouldn't. And it this chapter, how nearly he succumbed - thanks to Rickey!
Author's Response: Wow, that is so kind of you to say! Thank you! Twelve certainly is having a tough go of it. And itís about to get more complicated next chapter...although, perhaps *some* things will be a lot less complicated as well. ;) Stay tuned!
Oh boy, this update had it all...highs, lows, near misses, revelations, hope, jealousy and hope...a brilliant update to share on this Christmas evening...thanks for posting.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I truly appreciate that youíve stuck with me for so long and that you let me know your thoughts. :) Fingers crossed that I can get the next chapter up soon, thereís even bigger twists to come!
The Doctor has a good plan, so you know something is going to go wrong...Twelve was the right generation to stumble across, not sure this conversation or outcome would be the same with Ten...thanks for continuing to post.
OMG, how is this going to get fixed? Loving this story. 12/Rose are a great couple. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love these two together as well. :) Reveals are coming up soon, so stayed tuned!
I'm glad Rose is smart enough to figure out something does not fit. Now he has a whole lot of fixing to do
Author's Response: Yes he does. WAY more fixing than he even knows. Thankfully Rose is good at knocking some sense into him. Thank you, math! :)
Theyíre better with her...that line just warms my shipper heart.
Author's Response: I like Twelve getting all romantic about Rose. If only Clara could see him now lol Thank you!
Iím loving this story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm working on an update :)
So glad to see you posting a new story. This is looking to be a delightful adventure. I love Rose's pet.
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, hello Math!! It's soooo lovely to hear from you!! I'm thrilled that you're reading my new story! Thank you!!
The Doctor drenched in only boxers would be a lovely sight...of course Rose would find a way to possibly injure herself, trouble finds her no matter where she goes.
Author's Response: Ha, you are the second person to say that! :D And yeah, jeopardy-friendly Rose...gonna be tougher for the Doctor to keep his distance now.