Sixty-nine words, lilli, and so hot it could melt my laptop screen ... I’ve read it four times .. how d’you do that? Ahah! Everything you wrote is of their senses: everything he does ignites her in a unique way, a conflagration of sensations and perceptions. Physiology and poetry. Gorgeous writing! And, damn, now I really want him to do it to me.
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, I think I've over excited you! Thank you, as always. xx
Gorgeous! So full of passion and desire. *fans self*
Thank you so much for sharing your incredible talent with all of us!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for your kind words - but as this little fic is only 69 words, I really don't think I deserve them. xx