" His mind throws up the words 'Hot Romana Action' and he blinks at that because he really is getting perverted in his old age. "
It's a testament to your skills that that line didn't break the flow at all. Bravo, say I, bravo - quite hot and definitely sad and as angsty as Ten's dodgy fantasies would almost certainly be.
This is absolutely gorgeous.
Whatever's wrong with you... is no little thing. *grins*
Favourite bit: "That was nice," she says, after some uncertain length of time.
He stares at her. "Nice?"
"Well, I don't want you getting arrogant."
Disturbing, lovely and sad at the same time, which is a very difficult combo to pull off successfully. Very interesting insight into the Doctor and how unutterably screwed up he is.
Smutty and Evil and Horribly, Horribly Sad. Definitely one of yours. Also Exceptionally Brilliant. Again, yours.