2009.06.26 - 01:45AM
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Dude, you made me like Ten in the context of this fic. Good job.

(PS I am reccing you in three_settings tonight, whee!)

2008.05.08 - 04:54PM
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I never, ever even *thought* of this pairing, but you made it work! Great!

2006.04.03 - 08:57PM
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omg.omg.omg. You filled that void very nicely, for this is the gold standard that all other Jackie/Ten p0rn stories will be compared against.

2006.04.03 - 11:13AM
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I'm really torn here - on the one hand this is a really well written story. On the other... the Doctor and Jackie !!!??? My Good God NO.! But on the whole, I have to say well done you.!

2006.04.03 - 06:27AM
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This is wonderful. You are an extremely talented writer (something I'm sure you've heard before) and I like all of the stories you've posted here. You have an amazing ability to get inside your characters' heads and describe things from their viewpoints, especially when that viewpoint is unexpected and exceptional.

This story really captures Jackie's energy, sensuality and frustration. It's compassionate without being condescending. It's sensitive as well as being teh hawt.

Personally I'd like it if Jackie were less selfconscious--if she could feel more confidently seductive without worrying so much about her looks, but I suppose that's just wishful thinking on my part--your representation here seems far more realistic. You bring out a side of Jackie I hadn't recognized, but now makes perfect sense.

Absolutely lovely. Thank you. I look forward to more.

2006.04.02 - 03:22PM
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sigh* The only thing I'm horrified about is how well I understand Jackie's POV. You handled it very well. 8)

wmr
2006.04.02 - 01:27PM
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*is horrified*

But that's what you wanted, isn't it?