2020.02.22 - 01:51AM
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oh i adore her in every story you give us.

2016.09.25 - 04:55PM
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Beautiful.

2016.04.21 - 04:48PM
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This is great! Such a clever idea!

2016.03.19 - 01:23PM
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This was so sweet. Stories like these make me appreciate 12 a lot more :)

2016.03.19 - 04:46AM
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This was magically written!

2016.03.19 - 03:11AM
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Really well done.

2016.03.18 - 08:44PM
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Wow... That was beautiful...

2016.03.18 - 08:04PM
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Despite the title, I started out thinking this was granddaughter Susan, but things didn't fit, and then I realized it must be his mother. Nicely done, and really nice characterization of Twelve.

IrishVampire13
2016.03.18 - 04:10PM
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Oh, that was beautiful. Very, very nicely done. :) I never saw it coming.

2016.03.18 - 02:08PM
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This is brilliant! I've never really put too much stock in the "half human on my mother's side" canon, but you have weaved a believable story out of it. Love it!

2016.03.18 - 02:05PM
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I've never been into the "half human on my mother's side" thing, but damn, you made it work.

2016.03.18 - 10:56AM
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Oh, wow... I loved this! Nice work on the twist. Very clever, and very well done. Just enough info to let the imagination take over the rest. Bravo!