Reviews For Duplicity

2016.01.09 - 03:57PM
28: Chapter 27

I loved this so much, the healing between Rose and Jackie and then Rose and John of course. Her shyly calling him sexy, and him briefly wordless when she proposed. Gorgeous!

Author's Response: Thank you! Jackie has been through such a rough time too, and seeing her daughter happy and whole has gone a long way toward her own healing process.

2016.01.09 - 03:45PM
28: Chapter 27

SQUEEEEEE. I knew what was on that chain and I'm so glad I was right, that she was keeping it (and him) close to her heart even when they were apart. That was just gorgeous and perfect. Wilf and Jackie were wonderful in this chapter (and I loved it) but it was Rose (and John) who stole the show, with her voicing what she/they wanted in life: each other. I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It was a long, hard journey for Rose to reach this point, but she's finally ready to embrace life and love to the fullest.

2016.01.09 - 03:15PM
28: Chapter 27

What a wonderful, hopeful chapter! And how fantastic that you sent them to Gretna Green to renew their vows! Thank you for sharing this with us! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Their happiness has certainly been well earned. And Gretna Green just seemed the perfect place for them. :)

2016.01.09 - 03:08PM
28: Chapter 27

Oh yes, oh yes! This was so wonderful! It all came full circle with the ring and I love that. The honeymoon this time is going to be beautiful, they love each other so much.

Author's Response: Thank you! About time that ring returned to its rightful place, eh?! And yes, the honeymoon this time will be a bit more pleasant than their first. ;)

2016.01.09 - 02:43PM
28: Chapter 27

Beautiful, beautiful chapter!! I loved the moment with Jackie and John dancing. Very sweet! And the proposal? I melted. Love. Love. Love.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Jackie and John were due a bonding moment. And I figured it was Rose's turn to pop the question this time. ;)

2016.01.05 - 10:28AM
27: Chapter 26

Oh, ah, the feels, the writhe in a semi-satisfied state now. But I need an update, because while this is beautiful and all, I can't wait to see what John is up to, what all about his past (sounds like the Time War to me) and what is that mysterious blue box?

Author's Response: All will be revealed in time, I promise! Next chapter is in the works as we speak... ;)

2016.01.02 - 08:23PM
27: Chapter 26

Oh, what a wonderful chapter! I am enjoying this story so much and just love where you're taking us. Thank you for the update, I'm already eagerly awaiting next Saturday! And I love how John's already making plans for when she's at her mother's house! :)

Author's Response: I appreciate that so much, thank you! :) And give John an open invitation to romance Rose, and he'll jump with both feet. ;D

2016.01.02 - 08:12PM
27: Chapter 26

I am joining the legion of squealing. God, the rumbling Scottish burr, THAT kiss, John inevitability getting caught sneaking in Rose's window(I can sooo so that not going well or being highly amusing in a John in bed sorta way). You've moved them along so perfectly.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! John just HAD to do the voice at least once. ;) And oh yes, he's making all sorts of plans...

2016.01.02 - 06:40PM
27: Chapter 26

Oooh. I was really hoping they would kiss this time, and this did not disappoint! Phew. You are the master of writing this sort of tension. I'm so excited now for them to start their "dating" and for Rose to heal her relationship with her mum.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! If they didn't kiss soon I don't think *I* could have stood it! Never a shortage of tension when it comes to these two. ;)

2016.01.02 - 06:30PM
27: Chapter 26

Absolutely lovely, what great progress they are making, love the relaxed feelings between them, the sharing of thoughts and feelings.....and oh yeah, LOVE THE KISSING!!!!!!
The courtship should be wonderful cos he is an amazingly romantic guy. The window? Wonder what he is planning.
Saturday is my favorite day of the week, thanks to you.

And oh, I tasted haggis for the first time last September at a SCOTISH festival in Oklahoma, it was dreadful. After reading how black pudding is made when I read Outlander, no way I will ever try that. Rose has my upmost respect for trying those foods!
(Hope I'm not insulting any SCOTISH readers, it is not my intention. Just have to remember I am a Texas girl) at least I tried, it and lots more of SCOTISH delights.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! It's been one heck of a journey for them, but it's all finally falling into place. And if anyone is up for the task of courting, it's John. ;) Your experience with haggis sounds exactly like mine! Tried it last year at a festival, and let's just say it's an acquired taste...lol. Kudos to Rose for giving it a go!

2016.01.02 - 05:43PM
27: Chapter 26

The tension is delicious and the pace they have set is just right if tantalizing.

Author's Response: Thank you! These two have UST down to an art. ;)

2016.01.02 - 04:44PM
27: Chapter 26

This was just so perfect! And OMG the Sean Connery line! John outmatching the character from the movie this was based on was pure awesomeness.

Author's Response: Hehe! Thank you! I couldn't resist slipping that in. I loved Sean Connery in the original story, but I've gotta say I'm partial to Ten in the role. ;)

2016.01.02 - 03:31PM
27: Chapter 26

Squeeeee! Nothing like a good, rainy night to force them to stay home... LOL! What a gorgeous chapter, heartbreaking moments of confession and restraint; and gorgeous moments of emotional release and celebration of their love, trust, and commitment.
I adore the idea of him "courting" her properly! And that Rose is at a place where she is able to confidently make those decisions for herself.
Brilliant chapter! Well, they all are. But this one was just lovely and positive.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Gotta love those rainy nights. ;) Rose has certainly come a long way, able to know what she wants, make wise choices and give back some of the support she's received.

2016.01.02 - 03:04PM
27: Chapter 26

Absolutely gorgeous. Part of me is sad of course that she's going home but I think it's the best course of action in her healing process. Plus the courting... I really love that idea. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! It was a bit of a bittersweet decision for Rose, but a necessary one. Time for John to charm not one but two Tyler women!

2016.01.02 - 02:53PM
27: Chapter 26

This chapter makes me so happy! I love how naturally their relationship has been able to progress on their trip. And now John will get the opportunity to "court" Rose and show Jackie that not all men are awful. Amazing writing, WhoMe!!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! It's been a tough journey for them, but they're finally oh so close to overcoming the past and fully embracing their future.