This is amazing!! There's so many things I love about it, but I think my favorite is in how simply you conveyed the complex concepts. Bravo!
I love this. I could just feel her frustration. And oh such a clever, sexy girl!
This is marvelous, and makes me wish for a whole episode done from the TARDIS' point of view (as long as it is written as well as you wrote her here).
This is a great idea! I love stories from the Tardis' perspective and you've done this very well. Thanks for leaving it open to any Doctor.