I absolutely love this. There's not nearly enough River/Ten. Well done.
Oh, that's excellent - very perceptive, and it shows the Tenth Doctor's better side, rather than him being a bit of a prat. And you get River right, too. Your stories are always a pleasure to read!
NOS NOS THEY ARE SO GREAT TOGETHER AND YOU WRITE THEM PERFECTLY AND AAAGGGGGGGH *flails*