Really intriguing. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am so glad you enjoyed it. It is a favorite of my shorter fics even though it is not usually as popular.
Brilliant. Very nice. 10/10 for general quality and a great read for content.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. This one came to me and I hold it dear to my heart though I knew when writing it would not have the type of draw that fluff or adventure fics would have.
I also enjoyed writing something in the present tense just to stretch my writing style.