2015.01.26 - 06:49PM
1: Chapter 1

My favorite line: Daleks are a fruit,” he added, “with seeds on the outside and a shiny skin.”

Oz might be better than Jack for a name...

Fun, on the whole.

2015.01.25 - 11:48PM
1: Chapter 1

This was really cute and interesting, I was just a bit confused about a few things: what does the Doctor mean that Jack's mum is an alien? And was it Twelve/Clara, or what? A really great story overall though. I like how you threw Missy and the Paternoster Gang in there.