Very well done, thanks for sharing this.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for reading!
Here from Calufrax, and omg, that was marvelous. The descriptions, the feelings, the change and growth, Ten's demeanor vs. Eleven's, Eleven visiting her on Trenzalore . . . I loved it all. And the ending, while sad, was perfect.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I especially enjoyed bringing Eleven into the picture, because it's so easy to imagine that the Doctor that put her there is the only one who visited her.
I really, really enjoyed this fic. It makes so much sense, from a character perspective, and it just seems so very fitting. I didn't want to like the character, but she grows on the reader subtly, until you're pleased that she finally found peace. incredibly well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! That\'s what I was trying to capture, the idea of this character that\'s completely alien and horrible, and how she changes, so slowly.
I enjoyed this perspective. Thank you for sharing it!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading! I\'m glad you liked it!
This was very good!
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m very pleased you liked it!
I agree with the other review. Really unique take on the two episodes and I think you did an excellent job capturing both doctors and the storyline. I've always loved the end of that episode because it showed us really how terrifying the Doctor could be (I felt we only heard about it before). You captured that and his merciful side too. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks! It just occurred to me recently that if the Doctor visits her every year, there has to be a reason, and that\'s where the story came from. Yes, the Doctor is truly terrifying in that episode, and it\'s one of the few times we get to see that side of him.
This was dark and oddly sympathetic. I don't think I've seen another post-HN/FoB story like it, and I meant that as a compliment.
Author's Response: Thank you! It was a stretch for me, as I don\'t write dark normally, and the Daughter of Mine that appeared in my mind for this is not a character I understand well. I\'m very glad that it worked for you.