That's weird and beautiful and v clever!
Amazing! I'm not sure I really understand all of it, and at the same time, I think I do... a little. Just like a creepy dream. Love it!
Gave me chills. Loved it!
Whoa... that one totally snuck up on me! Love it!
This made me feel slightly sick in a way that reminded me of being spun round really really fast. There isn't a line in this story that doesn't have more than one meaning, and every word counts. I love the dialogue and the vivid description of the room, the casual details of the birds. The map was a haunting image, as well as the snippets from the notepad. Brilliant. This is in my top three fics, easy.
oh wow that was soooo good. creepy and morbid and very very cool.
What a gorgeous story, and the ending is fantastic!
Oh, this is just downright beautiful. Simple and tightly written, and so many layers. This is going to haunt me for days.
This is so cool. Kinda reminds me of Neil Gaiman's short stories, in the absolute best of ways. Also, very different from everything else I've read of yours. I'm impressed and awed.
Creepy! And neat formatting at the end. Reminds me of Lungbarrow a little....
I think I've read this story about a dozen times. I love all your works but this is easily one of my favourites. It atmospthere it creates is incredible.
Having favorited this a long time ago, I read it again tonight, and realized I had never told you how impressed I was with the story. It is frightening and attractive (by which I mean it attracts me to it, line by line and image by image) in equal measure. A true dream of that which is not. Bravo!
That was just plain good.
Truly fascinating. I hope it leads somewhere, but if not, well worth it still.