Waw perfect ending :) cant wait to see what you have planned for the universe and for jack or are you just going to leave him there until his head expands :))
Author's Response: I\'m so relieved you like it. I was so worried. I spent hours and hours editing it, hoping it would sound okay. There are dark days in the future for the universe, filled with destruction. As for Jack... I have a good idea of what\'s going to happen to him. I still need to plan out a lot of the plot before I can continue the series.
what! you are ending it already?
Author's Response: There\'s only one chapter left for this story but I\'m going to continue the series. I love it too much to let it end. I think there\'s going to be either 2 or 3 more parts to this series.
I love this fic and I don't want it to end but at the same time Iam curious about your idea of ending it :)
Author's Response: I love it too. It\'s so hard for me to end a story because I always want to keep it going. I love the characters and I hate the finality of an ending. There\'s only one more chapter left. I\'ve been editing it and I\'ll probably post it early next week.
I have to say the part with the heart is my favorite! I love it I always imagined the doctor doing that :) all my dark thoughts are in this fic!
Author's Response: Thanks! I just had this urge to do it. I love writing a creepy dark Doctor. It\'s so much fun! :) The Doctor\'s definitely started his killing rampage. What happens in the next chapter might surprise you.
This fic hoes so well to the heart I you read it and listen to disturbed at the same time :) especial The Game and Indestructible. If you like rock give it a go
Author's Response: I love rock! I\'ll have to listen to the songs. Most of the time when I write I\'m listening to music. There was a song I listened to over and over again when I was writing chapter 17 that I thought of for the relationship between the Master and the Doctor. It\'s called Weapon by Matthew Good. I hope you like the next chapter. It\'s going to be fun.
Will the doctors turn for fun will come again :) that would be fun
Author's Response: Don\'t worry. The Doctor\'s going to have fun. After everything he\'s been through he can\'t wait to get revenge on Jack and the Master.
Poor doctor i have no idea how you will get him out of this one. How many chapters to go until you kill them :)
Author's Response: The Doctor is definitely trapped in hell right now. I don\'t know how he\'s going to get out of it. As for killing them... there\'s going to be more blood to spill before the story ends. :)
I have no idea how you will get the doctor out of that one. But I am looking forward to his part of torturing them and conquering the universe :)
Author's Response: I don\'t think the Doctor saw that one coming. The Master is so stubborn he won\'t give up trying to break him. He might just regret that decision. I\'m still working on how to end the story. I have some interesting ideas that I hope you\'ll like.
This is so brilliant i really hope the doctor will win and jack ends up like a witness to his conquest of worlds
Author's Response: Thank you! There\'s still lots of interesting twists planned for the next few chapters. It\'s not going to be easy for any of them.
Nonono! He must ne victorious! No he cant lose not now
Author's Response: Jack is doing everything he can to stop the Doctor, but will it be enough? There are many twists coming up in the next few chapters.
This was such a satisfying chapter I feel content :) a new era will come for the universe
Author's Response: The Doctor is getting closer to victory. The universe will never be the same.
FINALLY! FINALLY! I waited so long for this one little scene. A truly, terrific, scary, badass Dark Doctor. And I knew the only one who could write this was you. Thank You.
Author's Response: I\'ve been waiting for this moment since I started writing Until it Breaks. It took forever to get to this point but it\'s finally here. I\'m so happy you like it. Thank you!
Now that's what I am talking about :) he us the master now will he make the master his slave?
Author's Response: You\'re just going to have to wait and see what happens. I don\'t want to spoil the fun. I promise there\'s going to be lots of action in the next chapter. :)
I love this outcome! I cant tell you how happy I am that the wheel has turned :) next stop for them is torture land
Author's Response: It\'s nice to know you\'re loving this as much as I am. The Master\'s going to wish he never tried to control the Doctor. Everything will be revealed in the next chapter.
A small break in the control :) intersting but how much can his mind hold up :) I wonder what will happen to the master and Jack if you just killed the doctor like brain dead
Author's Response: The Doctor is back to normal. Jack is going to have to hurry to save him from the Master before it\'s too late. The next few chapters are going to be pretty intense. The Doctor\'s mind can only take so much.