2014.06.12 - 11:41AM
2: Chapter 2

Very nice. Thanks for continuing this.

2014.05.25 - 07:09AM
1: Chapter 1

And to think dear Leela would marry a Time Lord and stay on Gallifrey eventually! -grin- Great job with Four. I can just imagine running across a Chameleon Arched self would be a bit awkward.

Poor Ten, I felt so bad for him when he would get so confused about the dreams.

And poor clueless Martha, with no idea about regeneration at this point, she doesn't have the tools to help him...again. She really had the roughest go at the beginning.

I enjoyed the peek. Ten's reaction to him was priceless. Thanks! :-)

Author's Response: Thank you! This was mostly just an exercise in writing Four and Leela, two characters I\'m only just getting to know. It was fun writing for a bunch of characters who all don\'t have a clue what\'s going on at all. :)

2014.05.24 - 04:01PM
1: Chapter 1

An unexpected mix. I'd like to see Martha talking to 4 and Leela, but she probably has very little time away from the grounds. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: That would be interesting. I don\'t know how it would go - if John was there, Martha would probably pick up on something being wrong, but as she doesn\'t know about regeneration, she\'d probably be very confused.