A cute little story with deliciously dark undertones. Bravo!
Definitely an interesting concept, and one I could see 11 (or even 10) getting sucked into, for sure. Thought you did a nice job getting 11's voice down, though. Well done.
I liked this, I can imagine the Doctor getting into some trouble with this, but wonder what would have happened if it had been Captain Jack rather than the Doctor. I expect he would have been sucked in very quickly. Nice story.