Oh Eleven, nothing fits right anymore does it. This was beautifully bittersweet.
Author's Response: Thank you, Christine. And thanks so much for reading - and for taking the time to review.
That... that was just so raw and touching. Every glimmer of what he had, what he was... what he no longer has and what he is. Very good indeed.
Author's Response: I apologize for taking so long to reply. Thank you for your wonderful comments - Vicky, a review from you always means so much. You saw exactly what of him I\'d layered into his thoughts. I\'m glad it came through and thrilled that you liked the story that much.
I really liked this: it had a lovely, sad, and bittersweet stream of consciousness to it. Well done.
Author's Response: Miri, thank you for reading and for this lovely review. You saw everything that I saw in the prompt and tried to evoke in the story. I\'m glad it all came across for you.