Reviews For Intermezzo

2014.01.31 - 10:50AM
1: Chapter 1

:D Like I mentioned, I loved it! Perfect character moment between the two. Your description of the TARDIS was just gorgeous, so alive and caring with her thief and his friends. I loved River thinking of where the Doctor might be, how well she knew him and his reactions. You handled the difficulty in their relationship very well, their precarious balance and her trying her best to protect it, guide him as best she could and never show how much she could struggle with their situation. River gambling and taking chances because she just had to find and help him, too, love it. Loved the contact and communication between River and the TARDIS, and the way you described the Doctor sitting there alone, tense and quiet… *heartbreak* But the description of her touching him, his tensing at first, and then relaxing into her touch, was just gorgeously done. And gorgeous descriptions of the massaging, her removing his jacket and his moving to help. The "sensory avalanche" was wonderfully handled, full of sensuality and tenderness. And the embrace that followed, that moment of balance between them, was just gorgeous. The ending was beautiful ♥ Stunning piece! I was so glad I could give a little help with this, but it was near perfect to begin with ;) Love!

2014.01.29 - 07:11PM
1: Chapter 1

That, is simply awesome.

I love it to little bits! So warm, so caring, so gentle, yet with aching bits of tragedy lurking underneath.

Just a simple, quiet, "you and me" moment.

Definitely keeping this one.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

2014.01.26 - 03:56PM
1: Chapter 1

Oh, wow, this is so gorgeous and tender! Such a perfect character study of both of them as well as the ship...

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

2014.01.26 - 11:27AM
1: Chapter 1

This turned out absolutely beautiful. It's beyond well done.

Author's Response: Thank you :)