Reviews For Easter Island Gods

2015.07.03 - 02:02AM
1: Chapter 1: A Bit of Company

Personally I really enjoy missing scene fics, and I really think your premise for 11's Easter Island heads is interesting. If I did have one criticism it would be your lack of description. For instance, in the first chapter Fitz goes from friendly and a little flirty to angry/desperate with Jack in an instant. It kind of takes the reader out of the progress of the story. I do like that everyone's a little gay and all the characters are so okay with it, though. Good work over all!