2013.11.30 - 08:37AM
5: Part Five

Oh my gosh that was intense but I'm glad I read it!!! Please tell me Jimmy is gone for good this time, yeah? He needs to rot in jail for ever and ever and ever!!! Loved it, absolutely loved it!!!

Author's Response: Yes...he\'s gone forever! Never EVER bringing him back! I\'m so happy you decided to read it and liked it!! You rock!

2013.08.22 - 11:06PM
5: Part Five

How did I not know there was a sequel?! Is it bad to gush about how much I loved it, when it's basically all just whump?

Author's Response: I\'m happy you found it! I have happiness planned for them after all of this. I know some people who had to deal with issues like this and I wanted to show someone overcoming it when it rears its ugly head again. Hope you stick around for more in this series. :) thanks so much!!

2013.08.16 - 10:04AM
5: Part Five

Fantastic. I loved how she stood up to him and the little moment with Jack was great. Another amazing story, Ash!!

Author's Response: Hey! I was just thinking about you! Thanks Em...I thought using Jack would be best. I thought maybe using John would be kind of predictable and I didn\'t want that. Now I\'m gonna work on MFW and wallow in that almost completely romantic fluff. Such minimal angst. You rock Em!

2013.08.15 - 11:26PM
5: Part Five

Excellent! The tension was high, made more so by perfect descriptions of the environment, I could feel the glass as she slid across the pavement and shivered with her as the rain pelted down ... just perfect!

Author's Response: You rock, chica! Just awesome!! Thanks!

2013.08.15 - 10:17PM
5: Part Five

That action scene was epic--movie quality. :) I could picture every move/change of lighting so well.

Author's Response: WOW! Thank you so much! I\'ll be honest, I was really torn on how to write this but I\'m so happy you liked it so well. Thanks again!

2013.08.15 - 07:17PM
5: Part Five

(breathes tremendous sigh of relief) Now if I could just stop shaking...
You did a great job, Ash!!! Though I am so ready for you to write some lovely fluff now (and I'm sure you are, too!!)! This was so terrifying, but I love how you used the storm to show how their fear changed into courage and strength because they are together.
You are amazing, chica!

Author's Response: *LONG sigh* yeah I was DEFINITELY ready for this angst to end! Thank you soooo much for sticking with me! Now I can write happy ridiculously fluffiness...whew...you astound me with all your support! I\'ve needed it!! Thank yas muñeca!

2013.08.11 - 12:21PM
4: Part Four

Whew. That was a hard one, but you did a fantastic job with it. Little Tony broke my heart. Poor baby. Brilliant writing, Ash. You have me on the edge of my seat!!

Author's Response: Oh THANK YOU!! Rough indeed...I knew I couldn\'t keep Tony out of the story any longer. If she\'s screaming like that then you know he\'s gonna hear her and be worried! I need to finish this one. I think it\'s starting to get to me...with all the hurt and angst and emotional up and down. Thanks soo much, Em!!

2013.08.11 - 10:52AM
4: Part Four

A little psychological ... us think?! Guh, all I have to say is you better write fast ! :)

Author's Response: Well, I wasn\'t quite sure if it fit...I mean it\'s...no I guess it\'s pretty psychological! It\'s draining, chica...but that in itself is motivation to hurry up and write it. This next part should be the last. Thank yas!!!

2013.08.11 - 08:50AM
4: Part Four

(taking a deep breath) Woman, what are you doing to us?!? :) That's me trying to joke because I was so shaken by this chapter. Crying and shaking, first with fear and at the end, with anger. You always capture the heart of what's going on, and in this case, it is devastating. Amazing, ash, though I do selfishly hope you don't leave us here for long. I'm a mess. :)

And the bit with Tony... Rose is so consumed by her terror she sees his fear and can't comfort him. I can't even imagine. (sobs a little) Dang it, I'm tearing up again! Loved his talk with John.

Such a powerful chapter. Kudos for getting this out and doing such a tremendous job - I don't know how you did it. I think I need a hug now, so you definitely do. (hugs) Great job, ash.


Author's Response: (Hug) I definitely think hugs are in order! It was definitely a draining chapter, especially since I was envisioning all of it and could see it play out. I won\'t leave you hanging long. I think I have to put this one to bed before I can focus on MFW. And I REALLY want to focus on that one so this will come to an end soon! I only have one more part planned. The next lil stories I have planned for them are NOT like this! I have happy and sweet and fluffy!! I have three planned and if I ever get a prompt from someone that I think fits with them then maybe a few more. But I don\'t think I can do this much longer to them! They\'ve been through enough! Thanks again chica!!!

2013.08.04 - 03:40PM
3: Part Three

I punched the air and whooped when I saw this before I remembered myself. I'm always clicking on Jimmy fics, but this one is the best I've seen. I try my best to be all professional and constructive when I review, but most fics blow me away and leave me at a loss for good words. This one was no exception. I followed Coffee Shop like the little stalker I was before I got an account. When I saw this I was giddily happy. While everything with Jimbo is really taxing on my poor tattered heartstrings, I can't help but smile like the dork that I am when I'm reading, because you are just so talented as a writer. I can't write worth a flying pig fart. I idolize you and look for your stories any chance I get.
Basically:
Wow.

Author's Response: OMG! You...you are amazing and freaking hysterical!!! I\'m so ecstatic to know you\'ve liked this so well throughout! You have no idea what a compliment that is to me! I was TERRIFIED to post–still am actually. Every chapter I post I\'m like \"Craaaaaaaaaaappppp!!!!\" If you look, I usually have apologies before each chapter lol! Thanks so much! You just rock awesomeness and you\'ve made me giggle!!!!! You should post! Do a humor short or something...I\'d totally read it because chica you are cracking me up! Thanks! *giggle*

2013.08.04 - 02:20PM
3: Part Three

This is marvelous. Was it rough? Absolutely. But sometimes chapters like this are necessary. Keep up the great work! You rock ;)

Author's Response: You rock!!! Thank you, Em Kay! It\'s such an emotional and difficult subject matter. And when you\'re emotionally and mentally kaput already, it\'s even harder. Thank you again. You have no idea how much I look forward to your reviews. You\'re one of like three people I always count on to be there! Makes me smile all the time.

2013.08.04 - 12:51AM
3: Part Three

Ain't gonna lie, ash, that was hard, but mostly because of the fear I feel for both of them - for John's anger (shivers) and Rose's terror. And I second the love for Jack, taking a stand where he knew his friend shouldn't. :)
Emotionally taxing, this one, but you did a wonderful job. No worries, right? (hugs) You are fantastic.

Author's Response: :) No worries. I knew this one was rough. It\'s such a difficult subject. Someone close to me dealt with this and I can\'t tell you how infuriated it makes me! It might be a few days longer than usual to update because I need to work on MFW. Thank you mi amiga, Tink!! (Hugs)

2013.08.04 - 12:12AM
3: Part Three

Oh, good on Jack! Really nervous for what is coming ...

Author's Response: I love Jack. Always ready to defend! This might take a lil to update because I need to reevaluate some things. Need to play out some scenarios in my head. Thanks chica!

2013.08.01 - 10:58AM
2: Part Two

Fantastic job! The panic attack was very believable. And now Jimmy is going to run into John AND Jack?! I am super excited for the next chapter. You rock!!

Author's Response: Thanks!!!!! I based her panic attack over ones I\'ve had before. Next chapter is HUGE! A LOT happens and things......oh things get bad! You rock!!!!

2013.08.01 - 04:16AM
2: Part Two

Oh I'm on the edge of my seat!

Author's Response: Yay!! If I stay on track then the next chapter is HUGE!!! Thanks chica!!